238 – End (Correction)
Iris’ sparkling eyes made Jisoo Han momentarily at a loss for words.
What is it?
You must have seen her friend Rebeus get beaten by me, but why does he look like that?
Is that the case?
A high-level psychological warfare to induce distraction?
While he was lost in his thoughts, Iries spoke in a voice full of admiration.
“Awesome…”
“What?”
“You became a transcendent in the body of a mortal, right? This was possible even among the transcendental ones, even those who were in the beginning. Since then, it’s not unheard of, but it’s very rare. But to see something like that happen right in front of my eyes…!”
This is destiny..!
“Did you say your name was Han Ji-soo? I like. Please go out with me!”
Iries confessed while shouting with a flushed face as if excited.
Jisoo Han was dumbfounded.
“…Did I just hear something wrong?”
“What did you hear?”
“I heard you confessed to me.”
“Then you heard it right!”
“…”
Han Ji-soo blinked his eyes and stared at Irie-S. Sarah Iries also met his eyes with hers.
“Oh my god. What you’re talking about right now… Oh, that’s it. Words I want to live-“
“My heart is sincere! Please don’t slander me?!”
“Don’t give a damn. I just killed your friend Do you think it’s probable that you would say something like that to me?”
“Reveus already told you. Just a business partner I’ve known for a long time.”
“For that matter, he seemed to care about you?”
“Just because the other person likes me, do I have any obligation to respond?”
Han Ji-soo was speechless at what Irie Es said while tilting his head. He’s obviously right, but something is quite wrong.
As his expression rotted away, she hurriedly added her excuse.
“Don’t misunderstand. I’ve been turned down several times. And yet, it kept sticking to me from there.”
“I didn’t ask.”
“Even if you don’t say it with words, you can see it all with your expression?”
“Huh…”
Jisoo Han sighed and washed her face dry. She suddenly confesses that she likes the goddess she’s been waiting for once, so it’s because her ultangi is gone.
‘Why the hell are you fucking with me, really?’
I couldn’t understand Han Ji-soo sincerely, but Iries had her own way of thinking.
She admired her high-ranking Transcendentalists since her childhood.
Classified as the so-called noblesse, each of them was a person who reached the transcendent by throwing off the bondage of mortality on their own.
It was literally created out of nothing.
They lived a turbulent life that is difficult to explain in words, and were so strong that they could not be compared to those who became transcendentalists just by being born.
On the assumption that they put down their ego and cooperate, they fight against all the ordinary Transcendentalists who are far ahead in numbers to the point where they are not pushed back.
In addition, the high-ranking transcendentalists were warmly welcomed by the transcendentalists of the beginning, because they felt a sense of kinship as much as they became transcendentalists by following the same path.
Some primordial beings cared about high-ranking transcendentalists rather than blood relatives.
That’s why most transcendentalists feared them but admired them.
In the case of Iries, who had an unusual personality, his admiration was stronger than his fear.
Because of this, at one time, she tried to create such a being herself. But it failed. Being a mortal is weak, and if the ordeal is too harsh, it will be broken, and on the contrary, if you give it this and that, it will become loose.
After hundreds of failed attempts, I finally gave up…
What I had given up and gave up like that happened right in front of my eyes.
I saw a blackbird break its shell and become a phoenix and take flight, how could I not fall in love with it.
While Erie S was waiting for her answer in a nervous state, Leah, who was holding her arms next to Han Ji-su, opened her mouth.
“So, Master. What will he do?”
“What? I have to kill you.”
Irie Es prepared to slip away from her. She’s not the only day today, she just needs to come back later. After all, time is all that is available to them, who are transcendentalists!
But as she prepared to run away, things began to take a strange turn.
“Huh? Are you really going to kill me? The woman you like, Master?”
Leia expressed her disapproval of killing Irie S.
“What is it? What are you doing all of a sudden?”
“It has already been established that she is not this woman who brought the master here, right?”
“That’s right. But she is the one who played with the fate of many people.”
“What is that about?”
“…What?”
Jisoo Han’s expression hardened. Even Leia was a little nervous at the expression that was even bloody at first glance.
“You… Are you saying that when you know I hate it?”
“Calm down. That’s what I mean. It’s not just gods like this woman who play with other people’s fates. Right now, even the nobles of this world have a lot of slaves, right? Master’s world is not completely free from status.”
“Is that the same as this?”
“Of course it is different. The other thing is, is it necessary to be so picky with him while leaving them alone? To be honest, we made more mistakes. A place where they eat well and play well, that is to say, we trespassed into their house and ran into a mess, right?”
“No, so why is that so…”
Jisoo Han let out an annoyed sigh. His dissatisfaction did not seem to have gone away, but much of his initial ferocity was dead.
Leah, who knew her owner well, did not miss the chance.
“And if you use him well, the chewed-up owner will be able to blend in well with society over there? If that’s the case, won’t it be much less likely that the people you care about will be in danger?”
“…”
Jisoo Han fell into trouble. He had no interest in blending into the other side, but it was worth considering if it would keep those dear to him safe.
After thinking about it for a long time, Han Ji-soo said.
“For now, lock it up. I can’t make a decision right now.”
“Neng.”
Leah strode towards Iries and squatted down at eye level. Irie Es, who opened her eyes round, tilted her head.
“Why are you helping me?”
“Because I lost my light on you.”
Iris’ perverted acts contributed to Jisu Han’s decision to give up on being human and choose transcendence to some extent.
That’s why Leia wanted to save Iries’ life.
As I said before, there were also things to gain practical benefits.
“You will have to be imprisoned for a few years at the shortest and tens or hundreds of years at the longest, but don’t resent it too much? Because it was the best for me.”
“Ah, I don’t hold grudges. It’s not that long. Having a Noblesse boyfriend like that is rather good.”
“…Uh, is that so?”
That’s a short time?
I still can’t understand the thoughts of transcendentalists. Thinking so, Leia pierced Iries’ heart.
Since Iries didn’t resist, her body collapsed powerlessly in no time.
Leah slung it over one of her shoulders and pointed with her other hand at the remaining one.
“How about that one? I am still alive.”
Lebeus.
His body disintegrated and he could not move, but his soul remained undissolved.
Jisoo Han said after a short thought.
“Keep it locked up.”
“Yes. Since you said you’re old friends, I’ll give you a seat right next to her.”
“…A cruel bitch.”
Seeing Leah trampling on a man’s innocence like weeds on the roadside, Ji-su Han shook his head. Then she discovered something she had forgotten about.
“I almost forgot the most important thing. Ostrich. Absorb this and pass it to me.”
“What is it? Huh? That’s the fake body the master used. Wouldn’t it be nice to eat that? I’m supportive Can’t we just not eat it?”
“Yes, no.”
Since then, he is the father of the child.
Leah let out a sigh at Han Ji-soo’s firm answer and put her fingertips into Cloud’s heart. Cry. She pulsated, thick veins sprouting from her arms, and Cloud’s body dried up as it did.
Leah pulled out her fingertips only after she was left with only her skin and bones.
“I absorbed it. So what are you going to do now? Are you going back to where the master’s lovers are?”
“It should be.”
Jisoo Han’s body began to twist and transform into the shape of Cloud. Returning to Cloud’s full form, as he roughly waved his hand, the space tore apart and the portal opened.
Cloud stepped into the portal.
Shoot ah-
Crossing the gap in the shimmering space, he arrived at the central fountain in the imperial garden.
A gardener who was tending a tree widened his eyes when he saw a person suddenly appear in the empty place. He was so startled that his gaping mouth slowly moved and made a noise.
“Cloud… Mr..?”
The gardener knew what Cloud looked like. And Cloud knew a gardener too. He lightly waved his hand at the gardener, and the gardener shouted, convinced that the man in front of him was Cloud.
“This is Cloud! The hero… The hero is back!”
A commotion erupted in the garden at his cry. All the servants who heard the gardener’s voice ran in the direction from which it was heard, and those who did not hear just ran after them.
As the servants gathered, the fountain in the middle of the garden, which had been empty, was filled with people.
As the crowd gathered so much that they could not move, Cloud smiled bitterly and tried to open the portal.
It was then.
“Get out of the way!”
A familiar voice echoed through the garden. Surprisingly, the confused servants bowed their heads and stepped aside at the cry.
On the other side of the broken road stood a blonde knight.
Cloud saw the article and laughed.
“Didn’t he run away?”
“You can’t run away forever. You should get what you deserve. Besides, it was the imperial order, so I couldn’t refuse it.”
“I can’t refuse. It’s like a messenger, someone you can beat lightly and send it back.”
Cloud approached the knight and put his hand on his shoulder.
“Anyway, I made a good choice. Mars, running away doesn’t suit you. It’s better to break through head-on, even if it means dying.”
“…I am also a man who has a woman to be responsible for? If my life is in danger, I will run away without regret.”
“I’m sure it will.”
The one who faces the army of the Four Heavenly Kings alone.
“Okay, where are you all?”
“Soon you will all come down together. Hyung came back at just the right time for tea time.”
The door to the main building of the imperial palace opened as soon as Mars finished speaking. The butlers lined up in front of the door, and only after that did they appear.
Frilite, Katarina, Leslie, Shadia and even Laurenne with a child in her arms.
They stopped right in front of the stairs. And the soles of his feet did not move as if they were glued to the ground.
I just lowered my head and looked at Cloud.
“Are you asking me to come up…”
It seemed that I was more angry than I thought. Seeing this in a reunion of just a few weeks.
Cloud felt embarrassed and climbed the stairs as slowly as possible. However, no matter how slowly you move, you will eventually reach your destination. Cloud stood in front of the five women.
And when I stood in front of them, I was faced with a crisis I hadn’t even thought of before.
‘Who should I talk to first?’
This was a very important issue. Cloud’s intuition as a man said. That the choice you make now will influence the rest of your marriage in the future. It was a big crisis for Cloud, who wanted to have a happy family.
It was time for Cloud, who was drenched in a cold sweat, to think about whether he should speed up his accident by splitting the time of 1 second into a very short time.
From among the women, Laurenne took a step toward Cloud.
At that action, Cloud trembled and was nervous, but when he saw that the other women did not restrain himself, he tilted his head.
Whatever the reason, Laurene stood in front of Cloud and she held her daughter in her arms to Cloud.
She said to Cloud, who was bewildered at receiving her child.
“What are you doing? When you come back, you have something to say to your child first.”
At those words, Cloud’s eyes widened. He lowered his head as if possessed and looked at his child.
“Abu… Abba..!”
The child smiled broadly and waved her hand at Cloud’s face.
Cloud smiled, swallowing the tears that surged up in his chest at the same time.
He said, kissing her daughter on the forehead.
“Dad is here.”
Well, this end is not exactly what i expected… At least I enjoyed the story very much lol. Ah… also I wanted to see more kids or what happen with the girls, something like that. Anyways, it was a nice read at least imo
so in the end mc absorbs the soul of all the gods he killed and becomes a new god
it’s also hinted that he’ll be together with Iris in 100 years when all his current girl friends die of old age
after that he’ll battle other gods who come to see what happens to the guy who has a crush on Iris
still i’m pissed that the dragon king and blood king are spared while the demon king and the world tree die
The ending was ok really but the main problem I have with the ending is his freaking relationships
he was pretty much unfaithful to his own lover.
I love the idea that he got the princess pregnant and along the way realized that her brother is a PoS although kind of a stretch for her to kill him, even considering that he was injured when he fought with the MC as well as being mentally burned my his crush.
All in all if this story doesn’t have any side stories this is more of a 6/10 cuz his realationships are a mess and really shows he’s a hypocrite to his own “harem” (the girls aren’t even aware of each other as the MC’s women, except some of them who know)
-I just liked the development of Neri and Laurenne
– It seems that the author didn’t want Frilite and the mc together, but changed his mind at the end
-Katarina, Leslie, Eri, Ophelia and Mars lost relevance in the middle of the story
-Shadia is just a bodyguard
Rating: 6.5/10(had potential for 8.0)
Esto tengo que ponerlo en castellano porque no creo que sepa traducirlo xDD
SPOILERS
Seguramente el autor no lo tenía pensado tan a largo plazo y fue ampliando el escenario según iban pasando los capítulos. Al comienzo no quiere vengarse de las tres chicas sino hacer crecer su polla y de alguna manera estrenarse, esto lo hace cómico y alivia un poco tanto NTR en el ambiente viendo los POV de las tres heroínas, pero después de tantos viajes y encarnaciones no echó ni un polvo, en serio? Luego quiere un harem pero no está tan proactivo buscando, verdad? Solo parece interesado de verdad en Katarina y Frilite. Luego quiere seguir el escenario del juego y de repente vemos vidas pasadas sad, con drama, muerte y suicidios, y ya el tema no es el Rey Demonio sino eliminar seres trascendentales. Menuda manera de ir escalando, no?
No sé, queda un poco regusto amargo porque no parece apostar por ningún camino, sino que va aprendiendo a ser creativo sobre la marcha. A ver si la siguiente le sale mejor.
This is the ultimate end? Perhaps an epilogue chapter would have gone well into the story.
The ending kind of…. it like rush to end it but it also mean something.
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It mean as he become father he’s willing to do thing to protect them amd well as MC already op as hell there no need to say anything and even this isn’t first time he fight god or save the world.
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As we know now he hate God that play with life but as this world is NTR style it no wonder that Iris will get wet for him by ignor childhood friend.
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And MC just come to this world by accident while OG cloud already dead so mothing he could do about it Neria also dead and follow him.
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While those responsible for ill fate already get revenge.
– Gir got f*ck(literally)
– another guy got Cucked and even die by his sisters
– All blood evil already dead
– those NTR girls just got ignore
– those who love MC be with him while it hard to get order right but as we see he love them all so avoid to make it clear also good for our interpreter.
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Well it didn’t give a satisfied ending but I saw worse and ending alway give some empry feeling anyway so I’m fine with this and move on.
Yea, truly a mediocre ending.
Dang this story was really good! Thank you for the chapters!
Es un final “mediocre”
Pero no es malo en si
Sinceramente me hubiera encantado que el mc descubriera que tiene otros hijos con la madre de gis y con la recepcionista eliseo(de esta es teoría más que nada pero muy probable)
Deseo de corazón que se pueda ver el desenlace de estos temas y más momentos románticos con frillite para verla embarazada :3
No es un mal final
Pero es uno muy “mediocre”
Sinceramente me hubiera encantado que el mc descubriera que tiene otros hijos con la madre de gis y con la recepcionista eliseo(de esta es teoría más que nada pero muy probable)
Deseo de corazón que se pueda ver el desenlace de estos temas y más momentos románticos con frillite para verla embarazada :3
Bueno, diria que no es un final tan malo, bueno si lo es XD, pero eso no quita lo mucho que disfrute leyendolo.
Fin.
For the NTR trio, only neria have a complete story and a proper ending, Eri have some screen time cuz MC developing a romance relationship with the person who bully her (heck, they even make a baby) with like no real character development for eri or her bully (like we saw laurene being softer for clould but we don’t know if she really change or just because she acknowledge that MC is not just a commoner ) , ophelia is kinda…there cuz she exist???, still being throw around and around by others. Like why mention the trio is the original members of the hero party that gonna defeat demon king in the end just to make them seem useless, sometimes even less important than something like villager A , even the new trio is kinda there cuz the MC want it , katarina is like “here i bestow you the power of elementalist , now just being there , cute and no actual effort of growing or being usefull other than making neria suffer more and more” shadia is like cute doggo who can fight just being there cuz you there , and leslie is……idk, what is her pussose again?? Make eri suffer cuz there is a better mage in the party??? , feel like ingame while you try to grind the affection point with the harem and you acidentally lock yourself in an ending with some extra (laurene) , call it a day and delete the game after that with the gallery room full of locked sence
Wow, Anon phu I’m impressed by you’re super big brain. I mindlessly ready this novel lol. Wow you caught onto some small details, I just them them pass me by. ..
Do you guys remember Einar, the woman who looked like Ash that was MC’s two OG lovers in the first world?
I finally realized why she died.
It was around the battle with the Demon Corps Commander where he was surrounded, when her buff color was described to be pure white light that buffed the MC and overturned the battle. When MC turned around she became unnatural and he found her dead next day.
Why?
Remember Ophelia, whose divine power color also turned from golden to pure white after she lost Eris’s favor and began to subconsciously revere Cloud instead and regained new divine power with white color? The Pope immediately framed her as a heretic.
We also just learned not too long ago that MC went to slaughter all of the gods and goddesses of the first world.
You can draw the connection now right? It was likely that those god/goddesses killed her in some way/forced her to commit suicide because she blasphemed them for believing in a mortal instead of a god, and MC finally found out and took revenge.
@ferlyn: It was heavily implied that MC did something to reunite Cloud and Neria together since he can freely manipulate soul with Leah via mental connection and that a reincarnation cycle exist where all souls go.
Plus he was probably awakened as a God (Transcendentalist) when Ophelia became his first believer with the new divine energy color (white).
Anyway would have loved to see more children but it’s still a good end nonetheless. GG
This would be a awesome manga or manhwa
Tf is this? Don’t tell me it ends here☠️
L❤ve the story.
Hoping for a Volume 2.
👍
Haha, it’s always funny no matter what he does.
The Korean novels, always have an shit ending “sigh~”
But we’ll it was a fun Ride
poor neria and cloud, i was expecting neria and origin cloud would be resurrected at the final
The saint and magician didn’t even made the cut in the last chapter. Poor girls (despite how shitty they were).
The end!!
Complete?
Lmao.
ohh thats sweet. I wonder how the after stories will go. ohh I’m looking forward to the inevitable netori scene with the two gods tho.
End??
Ty for chapy