A Third-Rate Villain Sucking Honey With an Academy Bug

Rader says:

7/10 story.

Biggest problem here is that a lot of elements introduced in the world setting were never used.

MC said crossbow is a temporary weapon, he wanted to change it for Guns which also existed in the game world but after few chapters he never mentioned it. Yes he got a good crossbow but saying that there is no good gun at same level is strange. If anything best mythical ranged weapon should have been bow.

Second hell is introduced heavily. But no mention of Heaven. There is God but people like Demon King is acting like real God as he was able to change whole timeline and what not. There is no angel but there exist fallen angels. It had good promise, MC used power of demons and heaven side could have been added as enemies to MC in early stages, missed opportunity.

Third there are more than 70 Great Demons but only few of them appeared. And honestly fight is boring besides the second one. He just snipe the devils without even entering into fights.

Fourth, novel feels rushed.

Only good thing here is ending. That alone added one point here. It’s an okayish novel to pass time, not good one, not a bad one. Just an okayish novel with well defined ending.