Became a Third-Rate Villain in the Hero Academy

Suherman Joshua says:

At the beginning of novel, this story is enjoyable to read. MC enters as a minor villain named Theo from the prestigious warrior family. The writer created a misunderstanding situation which made the novel interesting, the MC was initially weak, hopeless and lazy with an inferior complex, but suddenly the MC change to want to become strong. The MC still behaves like ori MC who is quiet with twisted dignity of nobility. MC also doesn’t suddenly become strong; MC is still weak compared to the original protagonist and some other characters, but MC works hard and trains to be strong. The character writing is quite interesting. Nectar, the Orc, is bro to MC. MC’s fiancé, Irene Aslan, is shy and pure girl. At first, she gave up because of the MC’s negative attitude but fell in love again after the MC changed. Aisha, his cousin, who has a bad plot to replace MC as the future head of the family, misunderstands MC’s new behavior, then has a close relationship with MC. Piel, the protagonist’s original rival, misunderstood MC and mistook him for being a devil follower, and did many of weird things, leading to the misunderstanding that MC was having an affair with Piel. Of course, there was a lot of criticism of the writing; the MC was considered dense and didn’t care about his fiancé when he had accepted Irena’s feelings. She doesn’t chase away other Heroines like Siena (elf stalker) and keeps quiet when Shiena badmouths her fiancé. Because of his passivity, the other heroines also openly approach the MC, while he never responds to the other heroines’ feelings. The story becomes boring until the end of the chapter; many characters now praise the MC. The tension of the story no longer appears; the story becomes a slice of life.