0 – Would you like to remake the author?
[This is the final review of Becoming a Twin Swordsman in Magic Academy. ..]
It is a world where if there are a hundred novels, it is said that only one will be completed or not, but even looking at the reviews, I was not very happy.
It’s been a while since a fun game academy ice water came out, so I watched it without realizing the time was passing. The further back you go, the more the novel goes to Andromeda.
The reason why this novel failed is clear.
As the title says, fighting with twin swords in a magical world is interesting. The personality of the young protagonist did not match the web novel, and the balance between the wizard and the main character, that is, a melee ranger, was not found.
As if to support him, when catching the final boss, the main character only swung his sword and his colleagues held it instead of him.
I clicked on the completion notice with a mixed heart and entered it.
[I read a novel in which the cheerleader is the main character. I will never see the next one.]
[End of Magic Academy Cheerleader]
…Aside from that, there are a lot of comments that will hurt the writer. I guess so. It’s a work that ended with Yongdu Sami, no, Yongdu X Mi.
Since the setting was twisted in the first place, it might have been an established fact that even if Amman dragged it somehow, it would end like this.
Still, I enjoyed watching it, so I can’t curse at all.
[The world view, the heroine was somewhat attractive, but the main character is a mess. His personality is also the main character who makes a sweet potato that doesn’t fit into web novels these days. The characteristics of the twin swordsmen in the magic academy were good, but too weak. I should have added a bit more to his abilities. What if you put in some fraudulent skills? For example, do you know parrying? As for what parring is… (Omitted) Anyway, it would have been a lot of fun if I put in something like parrying. And then… (Cut out)]
When I started writing comments, I already started to exceed 3000 characters. Maybe it’s because a novel that’s been good for the first time in a while ends with Yongdu X Mi.
[Or would you just remake it like I said?]
The last sentence seemed too far-fetched.
What would you do if you used something like this? Should be erased
Tak!
I was going to press backspace, but my hands were shaking with excitement, so I hit enter without realizing it.
This feels strong.
I need to press delete soon. However, the author has already read and replied to my comment.
[Then, you should remake it. I’ll put some good paring or something.]
This was the moment I became possessed by this novel.
MC after reincarnating: Sumimasen! Gomennasai! yurushde kudasai!
Every author ever lmao
What would be worse? getting isekaied or suicide bait post?
MC completed a mediocre academy novel. The novel’s biggest problem was that the protagonist was a melee swordsman in a magic-focused novel so the range disadvantage turned him into a supporting character at start and a fucking cheerleader at the end lmao.
MC made a review stating everything problematic in a ‘what I would change’ style. Maintaining max respect without cursing. But forgot to delete one sentence ‘Just rewrite your novel from the start with my additions’.
Like every author ever, he got offended and isekaied him lmao.
Reminds me of the of the reason why the MC of Academy Baldo User got Isekai’d
Here the almighty author goes again
Itadakimasu~