I Can See the Comments on the Doomed Novel chapter 133

133 – A World Where No One Dies (Correction)

When Ji-hoon arrived, the situation was already over.

I was aware of that, but I walked forward.

The surroundings have become almost ruins.

There, my colleagues stand in silence.

They have shallow scars all over their bodies.

Especially when it came to Eunbyeol, he was coughing up blood after using his divine power unreasonably.

Perhaps the fight to break the seal or the aftermath was not easy.

Of course, the body of Ji-hoon who thought so was a mess.

After running with all my might, there was no place where I wasn’t hurt here and there.

Her right arm, which she forcibly wielded while suffering from burns, was close to rags.

Forgetting that pain, Ji-hoon hurriedly ran to the fallen Eve.

“Ah…… Jihoon, this is it.”

Eve smiled helplessly as she was held in his arms.

Perhaps that was the best for her.

Her body, originally light, now felt like her feathers.

That delicate body was so weak that all I could think of was that life was dying out.

As if the death was pronounced with certainty.

In Eve’s chest, like her eyes, was a sword of mysterious light.

“I’m sorry I tricked you.”

Eve said that as if muttering.

As if it’s really regrettable that this has happened.

When I saw these words and facial expressions, I immediately understood the situation.

Eve had intended this from the beginning.

In order to save the other spirits living in this world, she sacrificed herself.

Perhaps the sealing was also a ritual for that purpose.

Or maybe this sword was the only weapon that could kill her.

Anyway, the result was clear.

The shadow of her death is surely eating her even now.

“You idiot…I promised to protect you…But what if you go away like this?”

“No. You saved me See… The damage to the other children was minimal, right?”

I don’t understand.

I don’t understand.

Why did this girl have to die like this?

Does she have a happy smile on such a subject?

You mean that’s your responsibility as a godhead?

There must be meaning to her death.

With this, the many spirits that used to live here will survive.

If you simply count the number of lives, her choice may be right.

She knows that in her head.

I also know Eve’s situation that there is no choice but to do that.

But she doesn’t understand.

There is no way she can understand it.

She was a child who, just a few hours ago, had been sleeping on her knees and smiling brightly.

A kid like that should die as a victim of a quest like this?

‘Why…. Why? ….’

She has fought many enemies in the meantime.

When I saw a human, there was a monster that just wanted to kill me.

Whether hundreds of people were swept away or not, there was a reincarnated person who wanted to satisfy his greed.

There was a zealot who sacrificed people for the gods he worshiped.

There was a younger sister who deceived and sacrificed everyone, saying that it would be fine if only she and her older sister were alive.

They all fought for their own purposes, interests and greed.

It would be meaningless to talk about right and wrong there.

In the first place, this side didn’t even fight to be right.

In order to survive, I had to kill them, so I confronted them and killed them.

That was the enduring life.

“Why…. You… ….”

If he had to die, he could accept it.

It’s enough to think that this time it’s my turn in the repeated fights.

Of course it would have to be sad.

You may be heartbroken and regret your choices.

Maybe it’s too unfair to cry.

Still, he must have convinced me somehow.

“Coke! Coke!”

But not Eve.

This kid wouldn’t have killed anyone.

I am nothing more than a girl living quietly in this peaceful world.

But why did he have to face such a terrible death?

Who forced this choice?

No matter how terrible this world is, this is not it.

Only the thought that it shouldn’t be like this came to my mind.

“Ah…crying…for me?”

Until Eve said so weakly.

Jihoon didn’t even know that she was crying.

At that moment, tears overflowed from the corners of her eyes.

I can’t remember the last time I cried.

It was also an impossible world.

Eve, who had been watching him all along, laughed.

As if those tears were such a great reward.

“I’m glad. My life and choices were not… meaningless.”

Jihoon shook his head slowly.

I couldn’t stand the trembling in my voice and continued to speak.

“Not yet… somehow… somehow… I’ll do it…”

“Thank you. After all, you are a kind person.”

Jihoon already knew that.

That would be the same for Eve.

She has no way to save her here.

From the moment this sword pierced her, her fate was sealed.

“Damn it…!”

Suddenly, I remember the time we spent together in front of a campfire.

Crying when her naked body was shown.

Eat the food given by the rabbits.

The image of her sleeping on her own lap as a pillow.

She didn’t think it would be her last memory.

Then she noticed Eve’s thoughts, and had to stop this somehow.

“It’s okay… ….”

As if to see through those thoughts.

Eve spoke as if comforting Jihoon.

“Hey, Jihoon…Even though it’s less than a minute…Would you like to sign a contract with me?”

Eve and I met eyes.

Even in this situation, she had a slight fear of rejection in her eyes.

“……Would you be okay with me?”

“Yeah, actually…It was a dream. To make a contract with you.”

Jihoon held Eve’s hand and nodded her head.

All of a sudden, that delicate hand felt so small.

Soon, a light rises between the two.

It was clear that they were connected to each other.

This is the contract between the human and the divine.

I had considered ‘A Night Like a Dream’ as a contract candidate for a long time.

I never dreamed that I would be able to sign a contract like this.

What happens to the contract when Eve dies?

If the godhead disappears, does the contract disappear as well?

We value that connection above all else.

Jihoon held Eve’s hand tightly like a treasure.

“I promise. No matter how much time passes in the future, the only God I will contract with will be you. I will remain…your contractor forever.”

Hearing that, Eve’s eyes widened slightly as if in surprise.

Soon there was a smile on his face that was as clear as when he fell asleep the other day.

That smile looked really happy.

It was so bright that I couldn’t be happier.

To the best present Jihoon can give you.

Eve closed her eyes just like that.

“Thank you.”

The power completely drained from his hand.

“… ….”

Eve’s delicate body lost its strength while being held in Jihoon’s arms.

I inadvertently endured sobbing because of its light weight.

The slender girl’s body was too weak.

I can’t imagine how he thought of stabbing his own heart with a body like this.

At the same time, it feels like riding on the skin.

Just now, Eve definitely died.

[The special clear conditions for the main quest have been completed!]

[Recognize the achievement of completing the quest and obtain a reward!]

But there was nothing she could do.

Just as there is no such thing as a world where no one has to die.

“No, you are wrong.”

I looked up at the sky and muttered something I didn’t know to whom.

Putting Eve down, I took out the baseball bat that was beside her.

“Jihoon What…?”

I heard strange words from her side, but I ignored them for now.

Maybe it will look like a sudden madness to others.

It doesn’t matter though.

You can struggle with ‘still’.

“Can you understand that? After killing a girl like this… Can you still say, ‘I can’t help it’ and finish it?”

This world is definitely a novel.

It’s nothing more than a bunch of fucking letters written by someone.

About 5000 characters, just for fun.

She didn’t think that was a reason to die.

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There can be no world where it is okay for a girl like this to die.

As a person living in this world, as a protagonist.

That alone should never be accepted.

‘I don’t know if it will be possible or not. Maybe it could be wrong Still, it’s worth a try.’

What I took out was the text of this novel.

Episode 133.

The scene is the scene where Eve dies.

The situation from earlier becomes a text and unfolds before your eyes.

【Slowly, the strength completely drains from her hands.

“………”

Eve’s delicate body lost its strength while being held in Jihoon’s arms.

I inadvertently endured sobbing because of its light weight.

The slender girl’s body was too weak.

With a body like this, she can’t imagine how she thought of stabbing her own heart.

At the same time, it feels like riding on the skin.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

This is a novel of 5000 words at most.

At the same time, it was also this world itself.

On top of that, holding on tightly to the baseball bat.

Smash down with all your might.

– Awesome!

Sparks fly with a roar I’ve never heard before.

Intense pain flowed down the arm that was already a mess.

Even so, I didn’t stop.

I swung my baseball bat over the text book again.

“Keuugh!”

It might be stupid.

Maybe it would be useless.

There was no way the damn writer would allow such a development.

“What was that?”

As if provoking or condemning someone.

I shouted that.

Even if you don’t like me, no matter how much you don’t like what I’m doing.

Perhaps even if there are words swearing at the author in the comments of this novel.

“You can’t kill me now, can you?”

If you twist it, kill it.

If you can afford to come this far and kill the main character.

After saying that, I swung the bat again.

Wow! There was a sound similar to glass breaking.

At the same time, there was a change in the text.

【Suddenly, the power completely drains from the hand.

“………

Evee’s fragile body lost its strength while being held in Jihoon’s arms.

I inadvertently endured the bursting of sobs in my body, which was so light.

The slender girl’s body was weak.

How could he have thought of stabbing his own heart with a body like this?

At the same time, ride the skin and feel everything.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

Some letters are broken and fall out.

A few letters on the text book scattered as particles of light.

It was also at that time that a warning message suddenly appeared in front of my eyes.

[You are seriously violating the world’s probability!]

[I strongly warn you against your actions!]

[If you continue the action for more than this, you may receive a strong penalty!]

He laughed at the words that came to mind and moved his hand again.

As it is, the baseball bat hits the text bone.

-Jjwoong!

[Through and stand up, the power is completely gone.

“………

Evee’s fragile body lost strength in Jihoon’s arms.

I endured so much that I inadvertently broke out sobbing in my body.

The slender girl’s body was soft.

How could he have thought of stabbing his heart with a body like this?

At the same time ride the blood and feel it.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

-Pajijijijijik!

“Kahak!”

At the same time, blue sparks exploded through my body.

A probabilities penalty I’ve never seen before.

This time it hit me.

The feeling that the whole body is burning.

A trembling pain ran through the nerves and shook the brain.

“Ha ha…!”

But now even the pain felt like bliss.

Destruction trying to stop it like this… Obviously meant that my choice was the ‘correct answer’.

[I warn you that you are undermining the plausibility of the novel!]

I ignored it and hit the baseball bat again.

Ignore any pain or pain that flows through my body, and only move my arms.

[Through and the hand standing power is completely drained.

“……

This fragile body lost its strength without being held in Ji’s arms.

I endured so much that I inadvertently broke out sobbing in my body.

The slender girl’s body was soft.

There is no difference in how he lived a life that would sting his heart with a body like this.

At the same time, feel the blood burning.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

Once.

[Sugo hand standing power is completely drained.

” .. ..

This girl loses her strength in her arms

I endure so much that my nose sobs are about to explode.

The cow’s body was opened to you.

However, Ji-seo does not go to the mall, as she has done a life to stab people’s hearts with her body.

Feel the ride in motion.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

Twice.

[Son Seo Wan Pana da.

” .. ..

This girl loses her strength while holding her body

Looks like he’s about to burst out of his nose.

The cow’s body is open.

Ji-seo, who had a life of stabbing himself, went to the mall.

Feel the same.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

Three times.

[Seo Pana da.

” ..

This whole body is all that

Looks like you’re about to burst your nose.

Is the name of me.

This is a shopping street where you can live your life.

Dong feel.

Just now, Eve is definitely dead.】

-Puuuuuong!

“Keuugh!”

At that moment, the baseball bat that had been with me all this time exploded and shattered.

It was faster for the weapon to break than for the text bone to completely break.

I wonder if the strength of this spear is that great?

I didn’t know if it was possible or not to receive a weapon as well as a penalty for probability.

I couldn’t get another weapon out.

It was impossible to ask for help.

“That’s right…! Aww!”

I can’t speak well because of the pain that rages through my body.

He just hit the text with his fist.

Blood flowed from the flesh and bones along with a sharp pain that seemed like the body would break.

The arm was already rags.

There is no way that the power can enter the body, which is at its limit.

“Not yet…”

I was already at ease.

I understood with my body that I couldn’t break it with this fist.

Even so, I can’t stop.

At that moment, something began to approach me from the air.

“Is this a ghost?”

“No, more like a spirit… ….”

These were the animals of this place, who would have already died.

Children like blue spirits.

They were different in shape.

There was a rabbit, there was a fox, there was a squirrel.

Those who have to wander around as spirits already.

They came all around me.

Suddenly, I had the illusion that they were laughing.

It was as if he was praising me.

The thing Eve wanted to protect.

What the child wanted to protect.

Then, it was only natural that these children would want to save Eve as well.

The spirits came to me.

It flows in.

Guys have soul, strength, mind and will.

Proof that you’ve lived.

“Eve…What you were trying to protect…Were not the weak ones.”

The souls of dead children permeate the right arm.

All of the burns and wounds from the previous fight had recovered before I knew it.

On the contrary, he was more energetic than ever.

I can do it with this.

My body understood the fact faster than my head.

A right arm full of blue spirit energy.

He hit the text in front of his eyes.

-Kwajangchang!

Finally, the text is completely broken.

The letters scattered all over the place were blown into the air.

Finally, as if denying the writings that have been written so far.

Only the part where Eve died was erased.

[The ‘text book’ has been destroyed!]

[A serious error has occurred in the scene!]

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“Ugh, ugh…”

In the scattering particles of light.

Eve’s body moves slowly.

Eve’s eyes, which had gone out of breath soon after, opened slowly.

The sword stuck in her chest was also gone.

“Ji…Hun?”

How she is alive.

Eve had an expression of incomprehension.

[Acquisition of the attribute ‘Right Arm of the Spirit’!]

[You have obtained the title ‘The One Who Denies the End’!]

The moment I checked that expression, my entire body lost all strength.

It was as if something supporting my body had disappeared.

“This time…I won.”

After those words, my body collapsed on the floor.

I heard a voice calling me, but I couldn’t get up right now.

The fact that Eve’s voice was mixed in it.

It made me feel at ease more than anything else.