I Can See the Comments on the Doomed Novel chapter 40

40 – Reading level 0: Thank you so much for advancing to the finals!

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again and again.

The March rabbit came walking with the distinctive sound of high heels.

A dark, bleak space with nothing in it.

she shouted as she looked around.

“The Hatter! Here it is?”

Although the president who everyone looks up to at the ruined hotel.

She is just an NPC here.

Hearing her words, the hatter sitting in the corner waved his hand.

“Oh, like hair! What’s the business up to here?”

“If you call me that way again, I will rip your jaws out.”

“Oh, sorry. I’m so sorry.”

It was still an irritating tone.

The March Hare sighed heavily before getting to the point.

“Rather than that, *** came to our hotel.”

“what?”

“*** has come to our hotel! Damn, what is this filtering?”

“Proof that the story hasn’t progressed far enough yet. Well, just finished the first main quest.”

Is that all there is to it yet?

Progress was slower than expected.

Well, that part doesn’t matter what you think.

“Rather than that, why did you give the player a VVIP ticket?”

The VVIP ticket is a very special item.

No, in fact, such a thing should not exist.

‘Destruction’ exists to give people suffering.

To be precise, overcome that ordeal.

Or to give ‘fun’ in the process of being sacrificed.

In that sense, the VVIP ticket of ‘Destruction Hotel’ was a kind of balance collapse item.

As much as this world exists to satisfy you **.

If the characters were comfortable, they had to prepare for more fan service or trials.

“You know that’s a very expensive thing, right? Even if you simply count with coins… … .”

“Of course you know. Well, thanks to that, I haven’t had anything to write about yet.”

It was something that the hatter acquired through a bet in the past.

In fact, I had even half forgotten about its existence.

Anyway, to the person who has it, perish hotel is obliged to do the best service.

That’s why it was surprising that the hatter handed it over to the player.

“I bet you aren’t a nice person enough to do favors for no reason, are you?”

“I had some personal debt.”

The hatter shrugged lightly.

“Oh, does the hatter in the world owe you a player? What?”

“I confirmed through that person that the real *** of this world is ***.”

“Are you crazy?!”

The March Hare slammed the desk in horror.

Although the filtering was full.

Rather, thanks to it, I was able to predict the Hatter’s words.

“That’s uselessly uncovering the secrets of the world! If done wrong, it may be deleted!”

“I know. But what about the questions?”

“If you really knew, you wouldn’t do that! Knock-knock-****************************************************************************** It could be something you never did!”

“That’s why you’re writing a poem like this.”

The hatter sighed deeply.

Originally, he would have to earn a lot of coins at the store.

But he’s been sitting here writing a lot since the **Tuesday.

“Speaking. Did we have anything like that? Is there anything special going on?”

“[This has been deleted.]”

“Huh.”

“Thanks to that, I got a chance to appear like this without dying.”

“You were lucky. Originally, you would have been punished without moving until the hotel episode was over.”

The hatter smiled bitterly.

There were certainly many ways to punish.

Even if a supporting character like himself doesn’t appear, no one cares.

On the other hand, punishment is too easy.

Suffice it to say, ‘The Hatter was imprisoned for months, burned in hellfire for several days’.

A world where a person’s past and whereabouts are all determined by a single sentence.

It’s absurd, but it’s **Ni who breathed life into herself.

I can’t just complain.

“So what do you write in your poem?”

“I don’t know.”

“What are you talking about, while you’re writing?”

“I’m sorry, but I wasn’t allowed to read it either.”

The March Rabbit narrowed his eyes and tilted his head.

“Is there an article that even you, a reading level 1, can’t see?”

The hatter held up a tightly written piece of paper and showed it.

****

Hello, it’s always lacking writer schooling.

First of all, I would like to express my gratitude to all the readers who have loved my insufficient work.

You must have been surprised to see the author’s notice suddenly popping up in a well-read article.

While writing this article from before, I thought that it would be nice if this kind of content and situation came out in the work to make use of the unique characteristics of this novel.

Perhaps I hate the author’s words!

I just want to focus on the main character and the heroine’s story!

If you do, you can skip to the next episode.

Although it is described as written in the work.

Because the only person who can see this article is the reader!

I think the beauty of a novel that goes beyond the ‘wall of 4’ is that this obvious fact is not obvious.

The invisible part in the middle may come as stress.

It is also a feature of this work, so I would appreciate it if you could look at it generously.

The reason why I wrote this article along with the new year is because this work has been honored to advance to the finals of the Nobelpia ‘2022 Universe’s Strongest Contest’!

As far as I know, there are only about 5,000 works that participated in this contest.

It is said that only 77 works among them will go up to the finals.

Because I know that there are so many great writers and interesting works.

When I found out that I had advanced to the finals, I was really happy.

Despite the novel lacking in all of this, it is thanks to the readers who found the charm and loved it until the end.

No matter how many times I tell you, thank you so much!

As you know, ‘I can see the comments of the novel that will perish’ is an apocalypse novel.

And at the same time, it is also a work with the theme of ‘metafiction’ or ‘wall of 4’.

I wanted to show that the main character is not possessed by a novel in that worldview, but possessed by ‘this work being serialized in Novelpia’ right now.

The main ability of Lee Ji-hoon, the main character in the story, ‘comment search’ is an ability that shows this symbolically.

After a while, when new skills are released, I would like to show you how to break through the ‘wall of 4’ in more diverse ways.

As the number of episodes increases, the protagonist’s meta remarks increase little by little.

Sharp-eyed readers have already noticed this!

Actually, it’s still in the early stages, so I’m holding back.

Later, ‘Could it have been done this way?’ I want to show a lot of my meta abilities.

I wonder if this kind of experimental development is only possible at Novelpia, where you can check and edit comments in real time.

From here on, I’m going to go to the middle of the day, but ‘I see the comments of the novel that will perish’ is the 3rd work that I am officially serialized in Nobelpia.

At the same time, it is also the most popular novel among my novels.

Is this kind of material popular in Apocalypse? You may want to ask, but it’s real.(…)

In fact, as an artist, when writing a work, I do not put more effort into it or have more affection for it.

Any writing is valuable to the writer.

I’m doing my best to write whatever I can at the moment.

However, at this moment of writing this novel, I will try to remember it as ‘the best work written by Schooling’ to the reader.

Lastly, I would like to express my gratitude to all the readers who loved and enjoyed reading my insufficient work.

A writer alone cannot create a novel.

Especially this novel.

Because of you, this story was able to exist.

As much as you gave me undeserved love and support, I will do my best to write.

Finally, thank you again.

And I wish you all the best in the future!!

****

“……What is this, I can’t read any of it.”

“right? Neither do I.”

I’m honestly curious what the story is about.

Because the secrets of the world you live in will be written on it.

But you will never find out about this for the rest of your life.

Thinking like that makes me a little dissatisfied.

If I were ***, I might have some hope.

‘No. Seeing the extras dying, is it lucky to have a supporting role like this?’

Well, even thinking like this is **’s will.

There’s nothing wrong with complaining.

The March Hare shrugged lightly, forgetting about the useless thoughts.

“Anyway, that put our hotel in a lot of trouble. Suddenly, a VVIP shows up and the whole hotel is in an uproar.”

“Ah, that hotel has a lot of people with various abilities.”

If you think that the perish hotel is simply a place to rest, you are mistaken.

In a sense, that’s where the most powerful people gather.

“Don’t worry though. They will quickly become the best there.”

“Oh my, what is it? Are you already taking sides when you say it’s still early in the story?”

“There is that, but I had a little clue. It’s information obtained at the cost of a nice hat on this body.”

The March Hare has a curious expression on his face.

“what is that?”

“The artist ordered a new illustration.”

“ah.”

As soon as he finished speaking, the hatter’s figure disappeared.

……Where was he sent this time?

hell? prison? Or the torturer?

I hope it doesn’t really die and disappear.

Still can’t help it.

Unless it’s ***, the price for meta comments is pretty high.

Things that spoil the charm of the world and shorten its lifespan.

** is never liked.

“Anyway, he has a good mouth.”

The March Hare muttered that and walked away.

Anyway, this convinced me.

This VVIP had to be provided with the highest level of service.