I Can See the Comments on the Doomed Novel chapter 64

64 - bound for Busan

64 – bound for Busan

[‘Metafiction’ is further strengthened with the harmony of characteristics and jobs!]

[‘Unknown Information’ has been unlocked as the attribute has been strengthened!]

[The name of the world you live in is ‘I can see the comments of the novel to perish’!]

[You will perceive this world more as fiction!]

‘Hero? Is there a meta-fiction enhancement?’

I blankly stared at the message that popped up in front of me.

There were no significant changes externally.

Of course, that is only on the surface.

Along with the fact that this world is a novel, various information that I had not known before began to enter my head.

How this world was written, and where it is serialized.

Even information outside of the novel.

To be honest, from the point of view of the characters in the novel, it is not a very good feeling.

It’s not an easy fact to accept.

How can you maintain reason knowing that you are a character in a novel?

[The talent ‘Metafiction’ keeps me calm!]

Even so, the reason I’m sane is because metafiction kept my mind.

If it wasn’t for this, I might have gone really crazy.

‘Even the Creator is such an unpopular writer. A little sad.’

In the meantime, it seemed that he had restrained himself a little by saying that it was a contest work.

Do you think it doesn’t matter because there are two days left?

Or is it because the award went beyond water in the first place after looking at other works?

In the first place, the job of ‘Heroine’ is ‘Heroine’.

There is no irrational number like this.

‘No, in Apocalypse, the genre where the main character does everything alone is now too common. It’s not that it’s impossible to sell a major genre without any skills.’

I am an amateur because I am trying to succeed with a work that has a lot of likes and dislikes that hinders the reader’s immersion.

‘Whoa, anyway, this skill and comment search have been strengthened a bit.’

Of course, I knew from the first episode that this world was a novel.

Just added information about the circumstances behind it.

I don’t intend to die just because I’m in a novel anyway.

What I have to do doesn’t change.

You have to think about how you will use this job and information.

Since the writer has no idea, I must do well so that the novel does not fail.

So, dear readers, Novepia ‘I see comments on novels that will perish’.

Thank you for your love and recommendation.

“Jihoon, what are you thinking?”

Hyena, who had been waiting for me despite my long monologue, spoke to me.

“just. I think it’s very difficult to eat and live.”

“All of a sudden?”

Hyena tilts her head cutely.

Anyway, after seeing the end of the last episode, ‘No, how are you going to fix this? Is the author okay?”

I approached the March Hare.

I feel like I told you to leave it alone in the previous episode.

For the readers who see it, it doesn’t matter because it was already a day ago.

If you are driving straight, please wave your hand with an emoticon.

“March Rabbit, would you like to talk for a while?”

“Ah, Jihoon. Sure.”

The March Hare hurriedly wiped away his tears and nodded.

It seems that the collapse of the hotel was quite a shock.

If I were to say that my building in Gangnam collapsed, I would probably shed tears.

“That, first of all, I’m sorry.”

“It’s not something Jihoon should apologize for. Rather, we should thank you for solving our mistake.”

Fortunately, they don’t seem to be blaming us.

In fact, it’s not even our fault.

Because that was the best way to kill Kim Chun-shik, who was completely assimilated with the hotel.

Rather, the damage would only increase as time passed.

So, if you’re going to resent it, let’s resent the author who saw the building demolition scene in another cartoon and thought, ‘Wow, I want to try that too.’

“Now, what will happen to Mr. Rabbit in March?”

“Um, nothing special. It’s just that the job is moved from one hotel to another. Of course, my mismanagement is certain, so relegation is unavoidable.”

Having said that, the March Hare looked a bit bitter.

It seems that NPCs also have to work in the midst of destruction in order to survive.

Even in hotels, the ranks are divided into managers and ordinary employees.

maybe we just don’t know

Maybe the NPCs also live fiercely.

If you think about it that way, this incident is quite painful for the March Rabbit.

After all, the March hare is also a victim.

You can’t avoid responsibility though.

“It was fortunate that Jihoon-ssi took it down. If left untouched, the damage would have been enormous.”

“hahahaha… … .”

When the March Hare bowed in greeting, my conscience stung a little.

If it hadn’t been for Yuri, we would have run away right away.

“What are you talking about?”

Then, suddenly, Yuri approached.

He was wiping off the blood on his sword with a towel he had picked up from somewhere.

It looked so natural that it even made me feel a little creepy.

To say that person is the same as the kid who laughed cutely.

I honestly can’t believe it.

“what? Why do you look like that?”

“just. Because I miss you who laughed hehehe with a doll.”

“…If you bring up that story again, then I’ll make you a doll instead.”

I didn’t know what the hell I was going to do, but I was scared and kept my mouth shut.

Still, he probably liked the penguin doll I gave him, and he always keeps it in his arms.

There was definitely a picture of a penguin on the cover that had been there since the beginning of episode 1.

It’s only after 60 episodes that the rice cake is solved.

It is clear that the artist is the type to shout and see.

“So what were you really talking about?”

“just. A little bit about what to do next.”

“Can’t you stay at the hotel anyway?”

At Yuri’s words, the March Hare nodded.

“Yes, it will take a long time to rebuild the hotel. I am sorry to the customers, but the service will end here and we will have to return it to its original place.”

The number of guests at the hotel, however, is estimated to be in the hundreds.

Although the number was reduced by Kim Chun-shik.

Even the remaining numbers would be significant.

You won’t be able to service it in a state where the whole building is blown away.

In the first place, even the building was demolished to finish the episode,

If I stay here all the time, the writers will probably get annoyed.

“Then I have no choice but to go back?”

“Finally, the 2nd main quest is over, and the 3rd main quest is in progress. Even if you go, there won’t be a big crowd.”

At her words, we nodded.

Even if you’re here anyway, there’s nothing more you can do.

It would be wiser to participate in the main quest as soon as possible and receive the reward.

‘Besides, it’s hard to expect anything more from this situation.’

The three of us quickly sorted things out and answered.

“All right. Then we will join the next quest right away.”

“Whew, thank you. ah! Before you leave, you must properly receive the reward!”

The March Hare clicked his fingers.

[All HP has been restored!]

[I got 3000 coins as a reward!]

“Wow!”

“Hmm.”

Hyena and Yuri opened their eyes wide in admiration.

It seems that both of them received the same reward.

My body is full of energy as if I woke up suddenly.

Coins are also 9000 coins if all three of us are combined.

That’s a pretty big amount from my point of view now.

“Can I throw away all this money?”

“Because you guys have the credit for solving the problem. I have to compensate for the damage to others. What I give to you is my little sincerity.”

“Then I should write my thanks.”

Of course, the more coins, the better.

I even secretly used coins at the hotel.

If we consider everything we have gained as a whole, we now have more than enough to make up for it.

‘Because even for me, I’m open to weapon enhancement, stat rise, and even a job.’

I haven’t confirmed it yet, but I’m sure there will be skills depending on the job.

As a result, the perishing hotel has been a great help to my growth.

“Then I’ll send you right back to where you were.”

“Ah, over there.”

Then Hyena raised her hand.

“Can you go to another place other than where you were first?”

“Um, it’s a little difficult if it’s a different world line or a long distance. Where would you like to be?”

“Busan.”

Busan.

This is where Hyena’s parents and younger sister live.

In fact, there were times when I thought about going to find Hye-na’s family as my first destination.

Exactly in episode 12 of this novel.

At that time, it was too far and I had no choice but to give up because of various circumstances.

If you can go right away, the story is a little different.

“Hmm, it’s not that far from where I was. Wait.”

March Hare waved his hand and recognized something.

He nodded his head with a bright expression.

“Yes, after checking, I think that level of intervention is possible!”

“Wow! thank you!”

From my point of view, it seems like a trick of the writer to reduce the amount of moving to the next place.

Anyway, since Hye-na looks happy, let’s say it’s okay.

No way, I went there like this, but in fact, the whole family died… There won’t be the same ending.

If so, the writer must be a devil.

“Then I will send it to Busan right away! Even though things turned out this way, it was a pleasure to serve you all! I hope you will survive destruction!”

Soon, a white light enveloped us.

When I opened my eyes, I was floating through the tunnel as if I was being transmitted by something.

Did you feel like this when you use teleportation powder in Harry Potter?

“Something is strange. Is this even possible?”

“It’s my first time experiencing it too.”

Yuri and Hyena were also slightly excited.

In particular, Hye-na’s face looks much brighter at the thought of meeting her family.

‘Yeah, what. I had a hard time, so it would be nice to move around comfortably.’

[A serious error has occurred in dimension movement due to external intervention!]

[Dimension storm begins! The transfer point may be different from the original one!]

…….Did I just say that?

Our bodies shook greatly with the message that suddenly appeared.

“Kyaaak! what!”

“Keugh! I can’t move!”

My body turned round and round with screams in my ears.

Soon, we lost our minds, no matter who came first.

****

“Oh, it’s the head. How did this happen?”

thud! My body fell to the floor with a sound.

Looking at it, it’s an asphalt floor.

Have you properly returned to Korea?

“Okay. Where have the children gone?”

It must have been scattered under the influence of a dimensional storm or something.

I looked around, but the two of them were nowhere to be seen.

Instead, it was a place that caught my eye.

“Kuaaa!”

“uuu!”

There were only dozens of zombies filling my surroundings.

“Wow, they send the heroine somewhere else and give them zombies instead? What, do you have all these novels?”

A lot of zombies staring at me.

It is a hopeless development that is common in zombie films.

If this were a web novel, one episode would have ended here.

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Comment

  1. Ag Sen Ag Sen says:

    forget the immersion, it feels like i can see my friend being played but i can do nothing

  2. MrPojsomnoj says:

    80% of time 4th wall commentary break feels like a gut punch. Sometimes it’s funny, but mostly it hurts my immersion 🙁

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