When I woke up, everything was different.
common room.
Clothes and daily necessities were piled up in the narrow space, so it couldn’t be that messy.
I couldn’t remember why I woke up here. When I woke up, I was here.
It was only then that I realized that I could see well even without glasses. As I was looking around, my body caught my eye.
Somehow it felt strange.
It was time to put the blanket away.
belly fat?
The belly fat that was heading towards middle age is gone, and the long legs are stretched out again.
My hand, big enough to hold a basketball, was also moving along with my thoughts.
“What is this… … .”
It was then that the truly astonishing thing began.
[Lee Hwan couldn’t believe it.
He looked around and muttered as he checked his body to see what he was thinking.
It was because the fist of Pacheon, who had beaten ten thousand demons, had turned into a bracken hand.
“What is this… … .” 】
It was a hologram, or something you could call it that, that appeared right in front of your eyes.
A window that appeared like a hologram.
It looked like an enlarged page of a web novel.
[ Started the first paragraph. – prologue ]
What followed also knew what to call it.
If the message window, which is common in web novels, is actually implemented, it will appear like this.
I couldn’t take my eyes off the strange sight.
who wouldn’t be My heart started beating faster at the thought of just in case.
After swallowing the saliva that filled my mouth, I spat out those words that made my heart tremble.
“Status window.”
【For a while, Lee Han said with a clear expression of excitement.
“Status window.” 】
The very moment when a new sentence was added!
Deed-!
Reflexively, the power went in. This is because a large vibration started to roll on the floor at any moment.
The whole world shook.
[Warning: The world is collapsing. Don’t use words that don’t fit your worldview. ]
[ Reason for collapse: Inappropriate word usage. “Status window.” ]
[ * The genre of this web novel is modern fantasy, but the system is not included.
“I need something novel.” ]
What is a web novel?
* * *
eyes opened again
He was lying down like the first time.
The sensation of shaking his entire body from the huge vibration just before was gone.
He raised his body while groping his face and arms.
Definitely not my body. Even so, I don’t feel the slightest discomfort as if these long sleeves and long legs were mine from birth.
Even when I touch my face, I can feel the place where the cheeks should be is empty and the jaw line is straight.
It seemed that I knew what kind of face it would have without looking at it.
Oh oh? Are you sure this body is a tall, handsome man?
“and… … Is this real?”
【 As soon as Lee Hwan came to his senses, the first thing he did was to check his body.
But it’s a strange thing.
The fist of Pacheon, who had beaten ten thousand demons, turned into a bracken hand, and when he groped his face, he seemed to have reached certainty.
he said as he got out of bed.
“and… … Is this real?”
he laughed innocently.
It must have come back from the dead. 】
It’s up again!
[ Started the first paragraph. – prologue ]
My eyes were drawn to the writing that was filling up in front of me.
* * *
I have to leave all the situations that are happening to me and say a word.
As a working web novel writer and 20-year-old loyal reader, this prologue is very outdated from the start.
The main character’s name is Lee Hwan.
The easier the main character’s name is to read, the better, so this is okay.
However, the problem is that if the subject matter is a common recurrence, even the introduction should start with a novel story, but this prologue is absolutely not the case.
typical
Also called cliché.
It starts with the moment when the main character returned without any part to catch the attention of the readers.
How important is the first sentence at the beginning of a text!
I opened my mouth with half vague anticipation and half regret.
Towards someone who might be in charge of all of this somewhere.
“I don’t know who it is, but I’d better write a new one. Change the genre.”
[The world is collapsing.]
[ Reason for collapse: Inappropriate dialogue.
“I don’t know who it is, but I’d better write a new one. Change the genre.” ]
Hard!
It was the moment when I realized what it means to be overturned because the world stumbles, not through writing, but through reality.
* * *
I thought about the reality I was in.
Doesn’t everything you see, feel, and experience point to one fact?
This is the world of a novel that a certain writer started to write.
And I, the main character named Lee Hwan, returned for some reason.
And my actions and words are reflected as they are to form a novel.
To be honest, it didn’t matter whether it was a dream, a fantasy, or something going on in the mind of some writer.
I just hope that this mystical experience will last a long time.
And I felt like there was something I could help with.
Anyway, am I not the main character of this article?
The third has arrived.
It all started with lying down.
Of course, since I started with the obvious material of regress, I would have struggled and tried to get the first start, but the regress has already been completed.
Therefore, this intro is decided by the protagonist, my very first action.
I focused on one thought without opening my eyes.
How can I start by getting my readers interested?
It doesn’t have to be an action or a description.
The monologue sets the direction for the main character to move forward, but even if it seems interesting to the readers, it will be a passing grade for the first time.
A line of monologue that the main character’s future can be expected.
I spat out after much thought.
“As much as this life… … I will live a life that satisfies my own self-interest.”
【This was Lee Hwan’s first word after returning to the past.
“As much as this life… … I will live a life that satisfies my own self-interest.” 】
Even though I had my eyes closed, I could see the sentences filling up inside the window of the novel.
okay. That’s it.
There is no need to waste pages from the prologue to the obvious story if you have already caught the subject of a typical regression.
cut here
Anything longer than this would just be boring.
[The author has completed (Prologue). ]
okay. good job!
I shouted inwardly towards the unknown author of this article.
[ The author is struggling with (title). ]
[ ① Kwon King (拳王) who only has self-interest.
② Justice is bullsh*t, self-interest is the best.
③ King Kwon was tired of defending justice.
④ King Kwon satisfies his self-interest. ]
[The title of this novel has been decided as ‘The King of Self-interest.’ ]
[The writer is satisfied.
“Does this feel good?” ]
Just as everything happens suddenly, so did the voice that appeared out of nowhere.
“Does this feel good?”
Along with someone’s voice, I could feel the presence at the front door.
The one who suddenly appeared was a man who looked good in a white suit.
“Whoa. After all, creativity is hard work. yes?”
It didn’t bother me that I was talking nonsense. The identity of this man is unknown, but what is clear is that he has this mysterious situation under his control.
“You seem to like it here too, don’t you? It doesn’t matter if you don’t listen.”
“who… … See?”
“There are many names you call me. What do you mean by god? But now I want to be called a writer. So I brought you into my art world.”
he even said
“The way I write web novels will be a bit different from you guys.”
You know I realize what I wrote out feels kinda like a generic Chinese cultivation novel. But I hope whoever takes this trash idea doesn’t stop writing until that story becomes reality and he gets his ass beat by the character he made up.
Yeah I mean it’s not like you can just create a fake world and watch them develop and grow and then steal their ideas once they’re fully developed and then just destroy them once they’ve achieved their purpose. Then you can make another novel with this same idea that I’m typing out right now but with the perspective of a person in that fake world, and the ending is “Who says a fake can’t be just as good as the real one” or whatever Emiya Shirou said and then he makes their fake world become a real world, drastically weakening the 4th, 5th, and 6th dimension and reducing the authority of the god who made their world while also gaining a status worthy to rival that god and he makes sure that no fake worlds are ever created again, but if they are created then he enters them into the real world after a certain point of development, thus he is called “Chaos” because he frees the whims of gods from their shackles and give them meaning while also weakening the foundations of the universe.
Oh yeah you know how I said the 4-6th dimensions were weakened? Yeah now the 7th dimension entities are leaking out so now Chaos and the god who made him have to team up to repair the dimensions and banish the 7th entities to the 8th dimension, but the 8th dimension is where the gods live so they put them in the Ulria Ha Junies Spatial Vortex Calamity Disorder Zone which is so messed up that even the gods don’t go there, it’s also where Hope and Despair live- two concepts that are made from the wishes of intelligent species- and the 7th dimension entities devour it gaining Hope and Despairs unique traits and evolving to become two different species that constantly battle due to their conflicting ideals. Mr Chaos realizes this and enters the Calamity Zone and enforces peace between the two, but in order to do that he has to live in that zone forever, or at least until one side moves out. There, in the unending abyss of nothing, he realizes something after having the eternity to think. It feels like everything was orchestrated, it’s almost like he was forced to be there. And there he finds the truth… god damn it he’s another of gods whim! Will he be the one to break the shackles? Who knows cause I’m not going to be the author.
That’s why synopsis are short because they fuvking think it’s boring
Then show me your words with interests