I Possessed the Villain in the Lily Novel

Redom says:

-> 80 cap review

It’s sad… it had so much potential and it was such enjoyable read at earlieast chapters… but i don’t know what happened or if the author hadn’t even though of a proper line to follow the story.

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SPOILER

I mean the premise is really interesting the protagonist is transmigrated in experiment subject ( deformed monster) and in middle of boss battle with the novel MC, somehow he manages to survive and using the skills of his previous life he manages to make his body “return” to that of a human.

MC wants to challenge the trial of the sage, so he could finally be able to sleep since to mantain his human form he isn’t allowed to sleep. MC finds out that he became a devil and not only that but a demon king candidate.

MC goes on jorney with Novel MC to become a human again while going through the trials of the sage.

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Hmm until here everything is good and really interesting. I like the fact that MC tries to justify that he is not a devil but human and works hard on his jorney to prove his humanity.
but the problem is the fact that the author forgot the plot and started roaming around, just like a lost child. I mean sure the title is about a lesbian novel but bro, thats not an excuse to throw away what u have built so far… ´

For those wondering what happened really happened. Well basically the novel basically went from such a cool and interesting novel to a novel where MC goes to each city and collects a new supposedly lesbian girl which initially are hostile.
After those lesbians find out about his circumstances and that he is actually kind besides being a devil, they feel pity and compassion. Those emotions ended up turning into affection and they find out that he only can atleast sleep for now through a kissing method.
SURE, somehow u can read this. AHAHAHA thats what u though.
HURRAY all characters are bland as hell, and to make matters worse, our author doesn’t develop the relationships (emotionally) between the MC and the heroines (maybe except Innis but it’s not even that much) which makes the reader (atleast me) confused of what really they are reading…

Besides what annoyed me the most about our mc was the fact that he thinks the heroines don’t even like him since they are lesbians they will only care for him because of a sense of duty if not they would find him repulsive…
Really how the hell he ended up on that conclusion… Even though he already knows that everything that he once read its irrevelevant because the scenarios are completely different from the original novel aswell as some characters.

In conclusion:
-> Good Start
-> Bad and repetitive Development
-> Innis best girl.

6/10