Breaking Up With the Heroine in an Otome Game

Hakdog34 says:

Honestly, what a waste of time. The early chapters were good but quickly goes downhill later on. MC can be likeable but most of the time insufferable with his contradictory statements and mindset. There are lines that are non-sensical and illogical.
He claims he’s mastered the game and yet doesn’t fully utilize his knowledge most of the time. It’s like for every 1 chapter there’s gonna be 3 bad chapters. The misunderstandings are mostly excessive to the point of frustration. Really, what a waste.

CrovoloDesu says:

Thanks for the update!

ꦗꦏꦧꦺꦴꦭꦺꦴꦠ꧀ says:

Summary of recent chapter:
FML: Noo, MC with another woman. No. I don’t want that. I only him in my side in the future. 10 years at least.
FML’s frenemy: You’re pathetic

Suherman Joshua says:

Yes, this novel is not as bad as the comments say. I admit that the story is full of clichés and is similar to other novels. The opening story is also not very strong, some arc is not. Interesting & too full drama, especially the stalker arc, that part is too long. But there is part that interesting in the story. We have MC realizing that he is FML’s childhood friend character in the game. She originally fake FML’s boyfriend but wants to end their fake relationship. MC is weak and only good at strategy, but thanks to his knowledge of games, he managed to get several weapon items, which then some people misunderstood that MC was actually strong and was just pretending to be weak. FML is confused about his feelings for MC and begins to be suspicious of MC’s secrets. MC caught the attention of the female main villain because MC thwarted her plans several times, but she still didn’t know who the culprit was. Ori ML still has a portion in the story and is interested in FML but it looks like it will only end as unrequited love. MC now pretends to like FML’s rival and tries to match FML with original ML.

Enter says:

Good!!

Jahe Manis says:

This novel is like The Novel’s Extra, but worse. Except the MC is the protagonist’s female childhood friend, everything is almost the same. Original male protagonist who is seen as quiet, cool and talented. Rivel’s original male protogonist is naughty and goes around as he pleases. Original rival female protagonist who is a rich child and daughter of a famous guild. The original rival female protagonist thought the MC was a genius who was hiding his talent and strength, so he started to be more interested in the MC than the original male protagonist and wanted to recruit him as a guild member. It’s similar, I find this kind of plot in many novels with the topic of hunters. The title is an otome game, but I didn’t find any otome game elements in the novel. Worst of all, the author depicts the original female protagonist in the original story, knowingly liking the MC but being able to hook up with many men. I think the author doesn’t know what kind of otome game it is.

CrovoloDesu says:

Read up to chapter 50. It really was an unexpectedly entertaining read, especially the last few chapters where the FMC becomes a little schizophrenic. I recommend this reading, more chapters pls.

psdt: the mc is average-well, he is certainly somewhat dense (I don’t know if I should call him dense since even his childhood friend doubts whether or not she really has feelings for him) but I wouldn’t say that he is beta or anything style, he simply knows that he is not OP and that the configuration of the world is difficult, so he seeks to ensure that his childhood friend obtains the necessary support to overcome the difficulties, and as both he and she (both of them are struggling with the feelings of she) do not have romantic feelings, the MC simply supports her and tries not to interfere too much since originally he should not have much relevance. He also does everything possible to obtain benefits but not modify the main plot too much in order to continue reaping benefits from his future knowledge in the medium term, knowing that what he does will definitely have a butterfly effect, he just doesn’t want to make that effect too crazy so It has to be measured in when and how much to act.

reikk says:

Since there is nothing to do, I can only embrace the poison