The Betrayed Devil No Longer Hides His Power

Su 183 says:

Poison really strong one

MISIB says:

Okay first of all mc and novel are a tiny copy of momonga/ainz.

1-Mc loves to show off his plans… The problem is as of now apart from 1 necessary plans, the others are just to fatten the novel without content, mc is already a demon king+rotten water player in a game that dk always wins… SO YEAH HE CAN EASILY 1X5 THR HERO PT. PLANS ARE UNECESSARY.

2-Logic once again is fickle goddess is VERY important in this world as…. Such… Pope can talk with her (but he cant, authot is confused as how the hell he will deal with this), hero lost her power AFTER she killed backstabing the dk, so goddess had adelay to take off her power or something?
Just get it goddess is a central part of the plot, but author just dont know how to juatify her actions, cause she is poorly made, in all regards possible, apparently she is on mc side, so…. Why did u let hero backstab mc?

How can paladins use holy power to commit evil? Dont ask author forgot to keep logic…
So hero lose her power to commiy massacres to lose her power but some holy evil guys dont.

3-waifus most waifus … Are therr to kerp the number… Author barely use them we have:

1-Girl mc likes now Hela.

2-Fenrir( 3 strongest, from dk army)
but she will losr some of her powers in a stupif mini arc, then barely appear in thr plot again, she was there simply to eat chapters….

3-blue haired girl, sincerely she only appear one time… So shr exist to eat chapters

4-Saint of the Hero Party(mc second wife, even if he dont have a first yet) here is thr problem apart from this saint, the elfs also backstabbed mc, so they were responsable for the massacre mc kingdom has been trought, so mc forgive them…. (pretty sure everyone is gona get mad at this 100%).

As for why i am calling mc ains/momonga.. He basicallt has ainz power, he even uses black armor and giant sword….
Also the fights areostly from thr other pov like some soldier saying thr are gonna mistreat some demon slaves… And such being ataccked by mc undeads and dying.

Okay some minor mistakes now.

Hero losing power in the wrobg moment…

Goddess is very poorly used, she may as well not exist….

Almost all arc involve a giant skirmish, but it could have been shortrr and given morr space to characters build up.

Mc Is very strong…. But hr is taking his sweet time making dumbass plans…

All characters but mc are reduced to bonk enemies, apart from mc everyone else just use weapons to fight and thats it, no super powers or skills, hela is use 2 daggers and thats it, fenrir is described as being fire user, but basically she just swing a sword, the blue haired girl used thunder hammer, basically just swing it too, the SAINT who is a buffer just swing her scythe too, even when she is a BUFFER/healer.

And lastly mc is responsable for the deaths and everything else that happened to his people, but this still is poorly talked about too.

Zen says:

@Kaniya No please don’t die!!! Start CPR…
Yes!! There is heart beat… Now start hypnotherapy to clean his stomach from poison.. mmh.. the poison is strong and nasty…
*Kaniya crying in pain* should we give him anesthesia ? *Kaniya says it’s okay he can hold on to this much pain like a Chinese webnovel MC* *after an hour the Kaniya is exhausted with the hydrotherapy* Hang in there buddy Next let’s start Hemodialysis to clean his Kidneys of poison….
Still i have i have no idea how to clean his brain from the stinky poison… We need help guys I am weak in neurology and neuro-anatomy, can save his life but if this goes on he will be crippled for life and retarded..
#Save Kaniya

[email protected] says:

I stopped hoping for good novels i’m just chilling in the comment section.
Even if a good novel pops out it’s actually so so, people are hyping too much i readed so much things that good thing seems meh, only my mood can make me read poison

Kaniya says:

To break your mind …

Continues

Mc follower (name :fernir ) who was swapped away by red water (in chapter 31) ..a little girl find her and heal her…help her but

Brutally killed in next chapter (32)…

Maybe I’m too sensitive

asf says:

Her horn look like another blooper that AI art did..

Yuki says:

Synopsis: The MC possesses the Demon King’s body. He wants to make peace by proposing a truce with the tribal union (a kind of combination of the human, dwarf, and elf kingdoms) and starting to have good relations with the heroes party. After a long time, the MC was betrayed by the heroes and killed. His kingdom was destroyed by the tribal union. Luckily, thanks to the resurrection item, MC came back to life after six months of his kingdom’s destruction. MC promised revenge. Now the female hero who killed the MC felt sorry but didn’t want to admit her mistake. She started to go crazy because her holy sword didn’t shine anymore. The Saints are also sorry. So what kind of form of revenge will the MC give to the tribal union and the heroes party? I doubt there will dungeon R-19 because it’s not R-19 novel 🤭

Sephir says:

and wtf why is her horn like this

Kaniya says:

Poisonous