I fell for a novel I wrote about ten years ago.
The problem is that this novel is a dead-end academic drama, and the subject of possession was the attempted r*pist of the main heroine.
The most f*cked up thing is… I have to fulfill my role as a villain in order for the world to not be torn apart.
pestilence.
yesss, thanks noble
x2
Aah the poison someone suck the poison out of me
I despise extra villain becomes good because he’s the MC plots, so stupid and annoying. If you really want to make it harder for the MC, don’t make them rich and everyone hates them. Make them a f*cking orphan in the slums of the sh*ttiest city in the empire, and then make it so that they just magically stumbled into a labyrinth of doom. So now they’re 1. Starved 2. Don’t know how to fight cause it’s a modern person, and 3. They have to fight monsters in a malnourished child’s body. Let’s make it so the monsters are god tier monsters too so that MC doesn’t even get a power boost, he just gets PTSD and barely survives.
IS THAT NOT A WORSE START THAN boohooo I’m a bad guy and everyone hates me but my father is good bad Duke who’s rich and power moooo it’s so hard because everyone hates me- like god if the god authors ever make me possess a villain, I’m going to make the Holocaust look like child’s play.
The problem is that ur normie guy reincarnator or wthv in the body of a child surviving an impossible challenge is too much of a plot armor
it’s like throwing invisible hands on my already enough damages mind
Arifureta kinda did it… was pretty good too
Unrealistic kinda, at that point mc will just die immediately cause there’s no monsters at his level, god tier monsters are capable of ruling laws and he’ll just die a moment he’s there without plot armor, which in my opinion makes the story worse, I mean any mc even if it meets a strong monster it is at a level where there’s a gap to be bridge through even if its almost impossible due to certain factors like memories, pattern, instinct, or op, abilities etc. But god-tier monsters are straight up impossible and will kill the mc immediately without armor, cause nonsensical range of detection is a passive to them alongside with broken af abilities.
In short he’ll/she’ll just die the moment she steps in the dungeon (you mentioned) without a nonsensical plot amor
Always see you in the comments every harem, yandere,and obsessive love commenting on the story saying that mc suck,weak,or dumb as hell but is how story goes
Is the author choice how the story goes not you
it got an update.. this thing still not done? Bruh.
so I have a question, mind that I didn’t read this and just read the comments to scope things out
ok here’s the question, according to some comments mc is a highly speced character that is now much than protag(the OG mc of the story) and has the potential to be as strong as end game protag
if he’s that strong, then why the hell did have to follow the plot then
is there some plot point where it was said that protag has some sort of special power where it’s only him that can hurt the final boss
if yes, then it’s understable, might try it out later
if not, then the premise is just brain dead
The mc thought only thre original mc court use holy sword but later on mc realized, og mc is not strong enough. Now he has taken the responsibility of saving the world himself
Why is this rated 8.8?!?
How obsessive is the obsessive love here?
i guess to to the point of angel or demon makes you immortal so you live forever with her? But that level is on the future tho
Thank you for the update! 🙂
Thank you for the uldate Noble ÒwÓ)/
*update
Can someone make a charecter list? It’s been so long that I have confused many of the names.
I remember there was
A dungeon novel which a man install a app to control monster in dungeon. Did it get removed?? I cant seem to find it and it was quite popular too
What novel? The one with the r*pe scene in ch 13-14 and 98? With a pink haired succubus in the cover…
I don’t remember the title of that one….
Sorry, If I offend you with my comment, It’s just the first novel that I remember when you say a dungeon that can be controlled with an app in cp is that one….
I just don’t remember the name (I bookmarked It but It’s not there anymore), but I remembered there are many comments that mentioned the r-scene
Dungeon monsters keep offering sacrifices, removed 🙁
Yes that was the novel, i had saved it to read update later. Sad day it is out here
No its okay , and yes that was exactly the novel I was talking about
Thank you very much for updating :3
It has as many bookmars as the villainess whome i served has fallen which you update regularly
I believe your wish has been granted.
Yes I also made a request on discord
Please update it noble sama
It has 700 bookmarks but it seems you forgot about
Please update it noble, it’s a very good novel.
is this novel will get updated every 30 chaps?
Waste of time.
Don’t listen to praise.
Apart from the semi-passive ones (in the middle of the first 50 chapters) with a childhood friend, the poignant ones at the beginning and the absolutely tasteless ending by 60 chapters, there is nothing here at all.
The thousand-year-old Vampire Succubi Queen is summoned, a virgin with no experience of even holding a finger with a man, a moe-garbage-filling harem waifu for Korean virgin MC.
wdym, ofc she has to be a virgin even with 10000000 years old, that is a wise choice for weebs reader.
and other harem girls is even important for harem garbage novel
dont be too realistic with a korean autistic novel dude.
if you want a woman with 100000000000000000 body count read some NTR doujin, gb or whatever
this is not for you.
Virgin fmc unless milfs is the safe route even if author doesn’t want to. Some of the fans can go rabid in a heart beat. I tend to ignore it unless it makes sense to some capacity since generally it isn’t so much author doing it because he likes it he’s doing it because it’s safe and less drama irl
Thanks for updating noble, it’s really a good series.
I hope you’ll update it regularly
29 chps
Aris as OG FML is ‘woman’ and boy can’t understand her mind when a high devil named Astaroth is best girl that we need. she is too good for harem route.
I really hope it’s pure love.
Well for now mc have astoroth in his hearth, but new potential girls appeared now
Thanks!
Thanks for updating.
update please
please update it noble sama
Update please!
YESS LOVE NOBLEMTL
THANKS FOR UPDATE
I’ll just post my hope for “Sub-Protagonist is Retiring” here
No bro go to discord
i did in the past
about 4 or 5 months ago
Thank you very much for updating
How much am I waiting for *Sub-Protagonist is retiring* to get updated… That’s one hot s*it.
Update please
The novel is really good
yoo, noble answer your pray just in one day 😂
haha yes i didnt think they would update it as they are not updating it from 45 days but they did hehe
How? Unless something happens in the new update, it is irredeemable. Did the MC finally give up being a dickweed and slavishly following the plot? Do we have any consummation of romance? Is there anything that takes it out of the generic shounen level academy setting? I’d really like to know, because I really don’t follow why anyone would consider this “good”.
this is good for me.
this suit me more than “how to live as an extra academy villain”
also dude,,, did you read that MC and the devil part?
the moment when the devil feels what MC feels and then they know each other’s pain, that part is god
I don’t know if you read this until chapter 65 or not, but if you haven’t, then you should.
and if you did and dont fel anything, then your standard is too high maybe kewk
Yes, I read up to his first interactions with Asti before. And I gave it another chance after reading these comments. And it still sucked. The adhere to the plot trope, the horrific “hide my powers” because “reasons” trope, etc. And the beta simp blood sucking thing ruined the Asti relationship for me.
Its just a bad novel.
The mc is now openly fighting against bad guys and showing his strength and he is now far stronger than original mc
Mc and the devil girl realised their feelings and also indirectly proposed to each other
They aren’t doing romance as they have a grand role but they both realized when everything finishes they can love each other
This is surpirsingly good, its okay to consume guys, dive in
The mid point is full of bs thou, bunch of grinding and power up no one care about
The relationship between MC and Asti “the fallen angel turned devil” made me keep reading, it’s surprisingly wholesome.
It’s good!! And why the fuc did you guys say it’s bad!!? Why!? I know that it’s kind of “I have to become the villain”, “oh no it’s not like the original story~”, and “I’m absolutely can’t become the MC” tropes, but listen! If only you guys also said that the MC in this story is not a dense MC and act sweet like those of “Komi San can’t communicate” (the infamous meme “get married already”) then I’m happy to say that I will read it. And yeah I also agree for the comments who said it’s a B tier novel since the only reason I still read this novel is because how sweet the relationship between the MC and the main heroine (Asti). As for the performance of our MC.. yeah I agree that he is op too quick (for my own judgement) and the battle storytelling is at mid tier (fast, not too much passion, yet you can see a glimpse of how the battle ended)
I’ll have to go back and read it again to give you a full breakdown, but the MC’s slavish adherence to the need to follow the plot and act as a villain is a grotesquely stupid and lazy trope; because of the MC’s gaslighting after the attempted r@pe scene – as Insufferable put it, the MC is “garbage disposal bin scum of the earth”; because the plot otherwise is a generic harem academy setting that amounts to nothing more than shounen level tripe; because ambiguous, unresolved harems are poison – I could go on.
In short, people say it sucks because it sucks.
Idk why others hate this novel
was about to drop at first
I feel this one isn’t that bad after I’ve read till chapter 65
The relationship between the devil and MC makes me read more ….
I NEED UPDATE
4/10
That’s it… The very premise is brain dead… Not sure why he wants to save the world at the cost of his life.. he just wants to.
And those long narratives of how the plot should progress and how he should balance his meddling and the progress of the plot, and how desperate he is to save the world, and how much he struggles to develop OG MC…. Sigh… At most I could handle till ch30… And the Romance is vague… It felt like torture when almost approaching ch30…
Not sure what I am writing… Need to recuperate….
U didn’t read it carefully and we don’t need it opinion
Never personally gave u one… If you like it read it… I don’t need a dumbass to tell me whether I should give my opinion or not.
Ignore him – your comments are solid.
the interaction between MC and devil is more wholesome compared to humans kekw
I recommend it, the charecters are relatable and actually feel alive and our mc isn’t brain dead or a goody two shoes. Shame this wasn’t a pure love though, the best girl is one-of-a-kind.
No, the MC is pretty brain dead (although the author tries to justify it).
But that justification is brain-dead in it’s own way
It’s cliche but hey, I like it. It’s not too bad.
What exatly does this rule mean bro?.
Sorry For the ignorance 🙏.
Better than decent. It’s rather good, actually. I quite enjoyed this novel.
I would’ve liked to request a chapter update on Discord for this one in the future.
But I can’t, as I’m banned from posting in the update request section. Lmao.
I’m curious about the reason for such a ban?🤔
IIRC I mistakenly broke rule No. 1
1. -Avoid duplication of series requests. Any instance of duplication will result in the discontinuation of updates for that particular series.
What exatly does this rule mean bro?
Sorry For the ignorance 🙏.
If you spam a message about wanting certain series to get an update, the admins will get mad and not post them just to laugh at you?
He writes a whole ass chapter about how he has to follow through the plot, yet it remains utter nonsense. I hate it when the possessed character tries to follow the storyline believing only in their knowledge, while things constantly go wrong and they even gave opportunities to other characters who may or may not be hostile to them. Complete and utter nonsense. Just kill yourself dude. Your life and your characters’ lives don’t really matter. Their stories are worthless and their pains are only ever slightly amusing if anything. Just do me a favor and kill yourself. Now that would’ve been a better choice. Weakling. Coward.
Zamn boi who hurt you this bad
Zamn boi who hurt you this bad. Do you need to cope?
Agree 100%. This novel follows that grotesquely stupid. archetype. I don’t understand why it’s gotten the positive comments it has. Just garbage.
arghhh this is good but also dissaponting me in the same time.
Not a bad novel. Easy B tier and even close to A tier. Here we have an author possessing a villain character who loved the heroine but due to plot Heroine didn’t try to reciprocate and villain tried to r*pe her. MC got in the moment of attempted r*pe.
Anyways, this is the basic summary. It’s about an Author who don’t want to deviate the story since potential of possessed body is not so much as per him. So he give the lucky chances to the MC. But of course as he personally experience the power and potential of his body he find that he can become powerful too, maybe as close as original MC if he takes the hidden pieces he didnt introduce in the novel or the ones MC can’t even use.
Also, there is kind of pure love between Asti, his contractor and him. But it’s harem novel precisely because he has a good amount of compassion towards character he wrote and especially towards those he designed bad plots. He also have some other mysteries which he don’t even know about.
It’s like this Original MC is a Hero maybe planted by Heaven as he hear some voices sometimes which tell him to beat the villains so his actions are kind of scripted. And the villain MC possessed seems to be the Hero world would have created as he is a human who wants to save the world regardless of the method and has great untapped potential.
Dropped at chapter 23
Super duper boring cringe common troupes.
Dammit.
I was reminded of a particular work I’d rather forget when I saw the situation with OG Frau and his childhood friend.
350661
Thank you for the holy code
Cual?
Fk, lmao. What was that story LOL.
One thing I don’t like here is the topic of rap*. The victim now feels guilty towards the perpetrator and realizes she has feelings for MC. C’mon writer, make her move on. Now the author makes it seem like the only way to get your childhood friend to like you back is to attempt rap*, then ignore her and make her feel guilty because she didn’t pay attention to your feelings.
I don’t know what the author was thinking, if you want to tell a villain story, be a complete villain. I hate it when the MC tries to be a villain but still openly helps the MC, isn’t that hypocrisy
it’s called an anti-villain
Not really, he just act to be a villian cause the role of that character he trying to be is a villian, secondly, he is someone from our world and wasn’t used to the act of being a villian too, he just wasn’t forced to make hard choice. Give him times, the moment will come when he is forced to become a truly bad guy.
More than anything, he is trying to save his own world from destroying itself. Already put on the goal of it.
It’s dog water because I think it is!!!! I hate villain novels, oh I’m so pitiful because I was a villain- man why don’t you become a true villain scum. Do it buddy, you’re already a villain!! Just be a villain instead of pretending you’re not. You cant pull that “acktually I’m a decent Korean social worker” because that’s a lame excuse, it better be something like “I’m a decent guy because I killed 98284 people and I am also known by the moniker ‘EDGY VILLAIN’ but since I have taken so many lives, I know the reward for such is an amount not worth it.” Type stuff
Alternatively you could just be underage like 15 and that’s why you’re decent, but dying at like age 11 is cruel in itself so not jeejejeiwowoowwldkdk idk what I’m writing anymore but now I think this novel could be good.
Unrelated but I’m curious if you know what dog water tastes like.
Anyway, villain sh*t is good for me, any way it’s presented either through genuine villainy or roleplay is fine by me as long as it’s written to be a good read. There is nothing more heartbreaking than a good premise massacred by an incompetent author. Oh, it reminds me of the many wasted potential and I’m crying.
Unrelated again but I really like it when novels embrace the edginess and doesn’t try to make things too realistic and just accepts the edgy energy. I have respect for those authors. I wanna kabedon them and raise their chin and approach my lip– kyaaaaa!!
Your thoughts are leaking out. Control bro control.
Is that good MTL novel
My initial impression is it’s good enough, tension is good, his goals are realistic and although he wants tp keep the story flowing as he wrote in the orig novel, he doesn’t have unrealistic expectations and plans for when it eventually gpes to sh*t.
Intial cons I observe are unnatural and somewhat weird dialogue, enough that it can be a deal breaker for some that has a high threshold for immersion. The same is true for the pronouns and names, it scrambles in a confusing mess so it’s quite annoying.
Fu*k. The way the almost r-worded heroine Asti is feeling blame for herself for letting the villain(mc) keep their friendship despite her knowledge of his love for her. And she feels guilt and self blame that his attempt of touching her was partly her fault for giving him chances. I know that it’s her traumatized and paranoid self making those monologues but it feels disgusting to read that an attempted ra*e even gives the victim blame no matter hpw small.
Anyways I’m disappointed.
Oh c’mon! Rpe by MC =/= Rpe by someone else
I hate rpe or attempted rpe done by randoms, I dont care if its the mc doing it or reverse rpe. The perspective matters. Believing it doesn’t it is just as brainded as those dudes saying netorare and netori are the same and crying in the comments in every cornhua out there.
Hm? I was fine with the attempted r-word the mc did. What I am not gine though is the authors approach in the emotional turmoil between mc and fmc and how the mc justifies and gaslights her more and leading her to a darker mindset. I know he does it to fulfill his villain persona but c’mon don’t tell me you weren’t disgusted by how mc shamelessly put all the blame of the r*pe on fmc and brazenly paints himself as a saint.
We all like a villain mc but this one is just scum. The attractive villain mc’s are ones with actual character and conviction as well as being self awere with elegance. This one is just plain garbage disposal bin scum of the earth. If god were to choose between mc and a smelly malnourished dog then god would choose the dog. Not that the dog is any more useful than the mc but that the dog is just that much better to look at.
True man , good to see some rational people on site who are not hypocrite about what they like. Atleast he should own up to his mistake and damn even if he went ahead and did I would not have felt as bad as trying to victim blame her as he is a only a ‘nice guy’ led by her
Wow, what did dogs do to you? If one is smelly and malnourished it probably means that it has been neglected. Why is an abandoned dog that is suffering through life put on the same level as a guy that forces themselves on people and acts like he did nothing wrong?
Haven’t read it so I can’t say how bad he really is, but man that comparison is so weird.
Mc got whipping treatment lol
uhhhhh… another villian one, imma pray that this one isn’t generic af
Pretty decent, MC is a writer who abandoned his work 10 years ago and is thrown into the setting. He takes role of an extra villain , makes contract with a demon and wants to follow the story. Things dont always go according to plan, mc isnt a villain. He is helping Og mc grow while protecting his back but he himself has to grow to keep up with the story so he wont just leave things to MC. Demon Asti is an interesting character, and in all similar vibes to Stopped Sponsoring the heroines and academy extra villain.
Does Novel really like the academy theme? every new novel, which the academy never misses
I will try to dive, pray for safety
I will try to dive, praying for safety. if I don’t come back I’m dead
Seems intriguing. Let us see the poison or potion energy of this work. My Myriad Poison Body is now able to withstand a thousand poison, I must see if it can hold it’s own.
You are the poison
The myriad poison body really is the most common constitution among recurring readers of this site.
ACADEMY VILLAIN AND NO MUNCHKIN LET’S GO
Also First.
First yay 😂😂😂
Faster than light