was caught and dragged by an email requesting a beta test for a sequel to a game I had been playing for 10 years, but the mods I had installed so far remained intact.
Enemy reinforcement mode, NPC gender reversal mode and appearance retouching mode, everything.
Even the character’s costume change mode.
I admit this is a petty reason to hate a novel. But authors target demographic is insecure losers*. So I dropped it.
Without really spoiling anything two girls take advantage of drunk, sleeping MC. And first thing author did was making sure readers know that this threesome is completely hetero, those girls are only into MC.
MC is such a loser that only way for him to get laid is women raping him. Also don’t worry those girls did not enjoy kissing each other. No sir, in this establishment women are only allowed to like MC. Oh and of course our forever single MC is somehow a god at bed. It’s insultingly patronizing.
I’d say it’s doujin level but I’ve read actual doujins with better fleshed out characters.
Nah, this is not a petty reason.
I also found it stupid how author specially mentioned that during 3some no lesbian action happen for some insecure mofos who’s reading this.
I have dropped many novels where this kind of sh*t happen.
These kind of novel just feels like a teenager wet dream instead of a good harem novel.
My mod list would be femc with white hair and needlessly profound so whenever I get possessed the protagonist is a white hair goddess and then I join her party as something and everytime she or someone asks a question I’d reply with something needlessly profound!!
Scenario 1:
“Hey where did you put the feed for the horses?”
“Far away in a land of self preservation and desire, there sat a cherry oak tree beside a clear beautiful stream, alongside an encampment of beggars and would be heroes. The end, while beautiful and worth it, is not the most fair thing in the world, but rather it is the journey.”
“TF do you mean by that??! IS IT TO THE RIGHT?? EXPLAIN???!!!!!”
“Shouting in anger does more harm than good little one, for all it does is prove your lack of patience and impulsive nature. Such is what causes grand kings and wise emperors to fall, for their hubris demands their fall.”
“Omg dude I’m going to 🤬🤬🤬🤬”
Scenario 2:
“Do you love me?? Answer with YES OR NO” with a sword to my neck
“Perhaps. The process of love is a complicated feeling, for the ability to love is trait unique to us intelligent beings. Do I love or do I hate? Is this the choice that man and her allies must walk? A duel between the two, persevering between both-“
“STFU I will literally stab you if you don’t answer”
“Patience my dear, did I not tell you it is not the end which is more beautiful, but rather the journey of which. Did I also no-“
“Omg 🤬🤬🤬” and then I am knocked unconscious and tied up to be tortured until I give in
Scenario 3:
“Yes or no, if you answer YES I will give you this sacred elixir with will heal all your wounds (lie btw)”
“Hahaha, to simply give two choices is not how life is granted. There is no event in which you will be locked to two choices, of course for lesser man this will happen for they are lesser than me, but I am enlightened! I shall carve out new paths no matter what-“
I get stabbed in the gut and die. Then moments after white hair yandere 😊 realizes I was right and I shall never be locked into 2 choices nyhahahaha, of course my life has ended but I did have more than 2 choices. So I won hahahahaha!!
Scenario 4:
“NOOOO I WAS REBORN 25 YEARS LATER! I can only surmise the destruction I will soon face in 12-18 years once she finds outs the fruits of her labor bore fruit!!”
and then in a really elegant looking room big sister has now turned mature sister realizes something is off and then generic novel story begins 😊😊
Most cautious case be careful when handling. Milky is on the borderline of mutating into something much more sinister.
YESSS SIRRRRR
dark souls R18 fanfiction kewk.
who wait elden ring DLC here? ME
Play black souls knowing you, you’ll regret and enjoy it so don’t shy away from trying.
Ah yes, this one with the comments being walls of text. Quick recap mc is a dark souls like entity( parry, dodge roll basically abusing I frames) in a world of Skyrim modded nsfw (npcs genders converted to female, all women are scantly dressed(aka see through camisoles and panty shorts and etc.), really sensitive affection meter(seggs,lots of it)) as he tries to stop the world from dying and surviving his new life.
If mc doesnt mod the dragons into loli and milf, that means he doesnt go far enough.
Login 😀
somehow the comment is more interesting than the novel
That comment is mucho texto i dont want to read cuz i dont wanna see a spoiler and im lazy.
Just 1 questions tho,
Is rize gonna have segs with mc? Cuz I dont care with segs spoiler tho
Damn, that is the most “mucho texto, im not reading all of that, I’m either happy or sad for what happened to you” comment section I’ve seen but wish me luck on this one, surely it won’t go lower than my already low standard..
Transmigrated to a Game Full of Mods
Rating: Good
What if you transmigrated into a dark souls game which has a max difficulty mod and skyrim R18 mod put into it? Well, you get this novel.
MC became the dark souls MC, meaning his body works like a dark souls main character. He can parry any attack as long as the timing is right, can roll to dodge any attack, only limited by stamina gauge, and can surviving falling from great heights as long as it is an attack sequence. (I am actually not sure if these are DS mechanics)
Aside from that, MC is also doing his best to save the world from Dark Souls bosses which can destroy the world while resisting the temptations of the NPCs which became females with no concept of clothing decency because of the mods. Naturally, he failed to resist the temptation and ended up having sex with some of the girls.
Anyway, I recommend the novel for the battle scenes and the hot girls.
Hey in description It is written that gender reversal does this have gender bender
Ig, i’ve read a whole long chapter worth of words… But im not sure…
And I thought that I make long and scathing comments…
Wait a minute I literally commented on this months prior ☠️☠️☠️
I forgot this wasn’t a new novel
Yes!!!!!!!
Holy crap dudes, y’all making my imaginary stories look like a kindergartener picture book 💀
@kk77
Sorry to say it, but i’m your normie reader.
I dont think my chances of being transmigrated is that high especially when there’s more crazy than me from a large margin
wow this is the first time i’ve seen a really long comment.and i’m thankful for that because i don’t regret reading this,it’s true it’s getting better now oh and i just reached chapter 177,and waiting for the next update
Wow. Feels like chernobyl in here. I can still feel the radiation from the nuclear fallout.
Greetings, this novel needs to be updated
Then there’s people like me who went into this with “no thoughts, head empty” to have a break at life
Cheers to all the poison testers out there.
This novels comment section probably contains more words than all other novels comment sections on this site combined.
Lol, if you write 5700 characters, you might beekai to another fantasy world. Similar to a poor hero in a certain romance fantasy.
I can’t decide if the people on the comments section here are trolling or are so serious that they are willing to write huge comments for showing that they are ‘right’.
Hahaha ROFL
I just check what happened since the novel is updated but when the hell did the comment section transformed from guys being attracted by the cover to being a battlefield of text walls
I don’t know why I’m laughing even though I’m going late because of reading your text but It’s really fun hahaha
lol i didn’t even see the 3rd guy when i did my 2nd comment. so now there’s exactly 3 reviewers going trash, amazing, and mid – respectively; arguably worse than having no reviews at all. i feel bad for anyone trying figure out if this is worth their time or not.
but what i really wanted to address
@Sephir
You, you’re cursing us right. bringing up the 5700 and telling us good luck…
if this wasn’t abandoned comments on an mtl site i’d never tempt fate like this, especially not on smth with such a garbage setting. i hate mechanically difficult games so much anytime i see games tagged souls-like it’s an instant turn-off, no matter how attractive the rest is. the only option for me is instant manual isekai.
Normally these cases dont end with a return, but if it did, just know that –
You’re No. 1 on the hit list.
Broo you knew what you were doing when you made your comment, and I for one actually read the other comments making reviews but skipped your comment cause I felt something about it was off. You have no idea how painful it’s just to read all that text.
Some space between the sentences would of been real nice.
Some people here is trying to get transmigrated into this novel’s world.
Holy crap, no one wants to read walls of text. I know there are probably important pieces of lore and knowledge in those gigantic text but I am not gonna read it because there is simply just way too much of it to read. Seriously, I’m not gonna spend four minutes and a half reading three humongous text that all go hand in hand together because there was probably a world limit that limited you from just making one long wall of text, not to mention a long amount of literature hurts my mind. Geez just writing this paragraph is making my eyes go blank from boredom and confusion. Anyways I know I am repeating myself over and over again and that’s partly on purpose but I am just trying to emphasize my point on why no one likes the lengthy text and its long replies. Just kidding I was joking, I don’t actually hate lengthy text and a lot of words do not actually make my eyes hurt. I wrote this long ass paragraph for no reason other than to continue the chain of long paragraphs. Mwhaahahah aren’t I just the evilest feller? To spend 5 minutes of his day just writing a lengthy paragraph for no obvious gain other than pure pleasure and enjoyment? By all means, mine wasn’t even a long paragraph. It was just me repeating “long paragraph” for like 100 sentences and I managed to squeak something out my arse that somewhat made sense. Sheesh, I suppose I should get going now after I revealed my master grand plan, it was fun messing with you and forcing you to read this comment that has no purpose other than to waste your time. If you didn’t read this, then I hope you had fun spending 10 seconds at max scrolling pass this.
gosh, these people really critically rated this novel
Aiyo! My eyes!
Well, thank you for the rather…comprehensive review. At least I know exactly what to expect when diving into this.
are these the famous 5700 characters wow.Wish u guys gl
holy crap I’ve never seen so much words in the comments before I gotta check this novel out now outta curiosity
my guy, i hope you don’t get ip banned by the admin, this isn’t discord you know
and i didnt really want to do an actual review, only spoke out a bit for sake of fairness towards prospective readers
but *someone* is insistent, so to clear up any confusion, one doesn’t exactly need a 100 chapters to see if its good.
to say what the other guy said in hopefully a lot less words and better spacing-
basically, the novel starts off reading like a fake story in a fake world. proceedings don’t make sense, only wonder “how, what, why is this happening” the entier time. the world mechanics, mc’s actions, and other char reactions disturbingly unnerving. it’s almost like a fever dream, close to being downright Kafkaesque.
a lot of times stories get criticised for having characters that don’t feel real. this however is on a completely different plane. EVERY character is like an actual puppet, and mc not much better – but there’s a reason, albeit a v. stupid one. it’s cuz the author can’t make up his mind whther his book world has pre-programmed npcs and physics and events that act only according to code, or game characters and world that became real. so they choose the dumbest fkn option :
Doing both at once.
mc waits for npc to follow code, and events to trigger only from ‘flags’ he knows, and anytime they dont the sky falls on his head. only, its not entirely his fault because sometimes they do exactly follow code like inhuman game objects and then sometimes they DONT – it’s author’s arbitrary decisions. is it a game world is it real world even author doesnt know so a reader ofc it’s fkn infuriating.
but after a certain point they finally decide on making the npcs real people instead of game code – which is what i mean in original comment – and reading experience immediately improves hundredfold. the physics and a lot of world mechanics still ridiculous game setting, but mc starts treating everyone like real people and world little more like real world.
And So, i said it gets good after end of holy kingdom which is past 100 chap mark, it’s true… but if you only want to check what point the stuff above starts happening to know if you can keep reading you dont necessarily have to wait that long. the holy kingdom arc itself is good, and that starts at ~65. the improvement itself starts a bit earlier with spider dungeon and inquisitor which is ~55 and before. ofc to say this again, ‘good’ is a relative term, the novel just finally just makes it to the starting line of other passable novel/game transmig stories.
then why did i specify end of that arc? bcs that’s where the true harem action starts. what else are you fkers here for. originally, i didnt want to spoil but i can tell you now that there’s explicit detailed r-18 stuff with at least 3 women, including a superb 3p servicing scene, and intimate stuff with at least 2 others with strong signs of… “development”. oh there’s also like a sort of fight with world-eater dragon and mc’s unknown background turns out to have sinister witchy origins but whatever i guess.
does it mean this novel’s worth burning 70-100 chaps for questionably good content? well thats up to you. everyone reads hoping for different things. if you’re out here over anime and ln/wn garbage, you already know we gotta suffer quite a bit. look at overgeared, or katekyo hitman etc. for example. the early grind there is literal cancer, and when u get past to the ‘good stuff’ secretly you’re still like… was it really worth it. actually the only reason i wrote any of any of this is cuz i dont wanna see this novel get put on the backburner for updates bcs one guy really hated it and now its unpopular. to me there’s a lot of potential and signs of improvement, and i wanna see it hopefully get really good. but id rather die than learn korean or pay munpia.
and most importantly of all — to anyone that actually made it down here — I am SO, SO, sorry. I also apologise on behalf of the other guy.
Im not gonna say that this is my most favorite and best web novel on this site like what one of those two reviewers said, cause it’s definitely, 100% definitely, not the best cause i see that this novel is good but not that good that make you think this is the best web novel ive read on this site with the similar theme and etc. And at the same time, i am also not gonna despise and dislike this novel like what one of them said, cause im sure 100% that this is not that bad either. So in a way, i agree with both of their points, but also disagree about their overall score given to this novel. Maybe the two of them will give this novel like 3 / 10 and 9 / 10 scores. If that’s the score, than I’d give this novel a solid 6 / 10.
The new con that i want to give is that there are way a lot of subplot on this story. Like, really a lot. So, even if you read it up until the middle part, even if plot is developed, there’ll be the times where you’ll still get bored, like that feeling when you know that this part can be skipped and just plain wasting time.
Okay, i saw two reviewers that have two polar opposite opinion about this novel on the comment section, thus i tried to dive in and read it myself. And so, ive read this novel until chapters 101. And all ive gotta say is that its true that the beginning part of this novel is kinda frustrating and not that good. The characters feels like they’re not well-written and just there as a cardboard characters. And its also true that protagonist is kinda foolish for not thinking about the effect of his action that much. And to be honest, i can see why one of the two reviewers said that the protagonist, in the early part, is dense. In fact, yes he’s, but i wouldn’t dare to call him really “dense” cause i think he’s just kinda ignorant for ignoring the effects of his own words and action, example when he chose to hide his ability and identity by saying about curse witch and amnesia things while at the same time not thinking what if the others find out because he act so suspiciously. And theres a setting and world building bullshit here and there as well, like stupid mods and NPCs things and the stupid dress like those two have mentioned. The plot is kinda mid in the earlier chapters. There are the ones where it’d be good, there are the ones where it’d be bad so i guess its kinda mid? But after ive read up until chapters 101 until the middle part of the novel, ive realized that the author finally fix MC’s personality slowly. The plot is also developed and progressed better than before. But the main problem is… the setting and world problem… they haven’t even been fixed and touched at all. Like, as kk77 said, there are almost no proper world building / development. The magic system and overall world situation really havent been fleshed out that well, the part that only been explored and developed on the world and setting itself are just that the protagonist go from the other place to place (mainly dungeon), while also giving a salt of a history if the place that the protagonist went to is another kingdom. So, as one of those two reviewers have said, its true that the world/ setting is still being the main problem up until the middle part. And how about the MC’s personality? He’s finally getting developed later, even if its slowly. Oh yeah, im gonna mention about one more cons on this novel.
…
And even if they finally fix the cardboard characters LATER ON, then it’s good. Ill still drop it though cause I don’t need to read up until hundred chaps to get into where the author fix that bullshit
And based on preceding comment, the setting (world building and stupid cardboard characters description on their clothing) and MC’s dense-unwise personality still haven’t been improved. The only things that gettin improved, apparently, based on preceding comment, is more into the plot and the arc itself. Those setting two things, of course if 𝘆𝗼𝘂’𝘃𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝗺𝘆 𝗽𝗿𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗼𝘂𝘀 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗺𝗲𝗻𝘁𝘀 𝗯𝗲𝗳𝗼𝗿𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵𝗹𝘆, are the exact main reasons why I dropped this novel and the main problems that I hate the most… and apparently still haven’t been improved. I’m dead 💀💀💀
And apparently the fun, in which the author drop all that bullshit, only start after the holy kingdom arc…. How long does it take for that bullshit to be dropped? Hundred chaps? Lol…
“Hundred chaps.”
“Just gotta make it past hundred chapters lol”
Well, if it’s alright for you to read that far, then it’s up to you. But even if it’s true, it doesn’t change the fact the MC’s dense personality problem, it’s really frustrating imo. And maybe you’re right about the plot development later on, but as up until the early chapters, it’s still kinda bland and boring. That is the most frustrating part of the story for me. It really threw me out of this novel. Maybe the answer above me likes it because of the plot or the setting in which I can see why, because the plot itself, as I’ve said, is not that bad and not that good either. And maybe it’ll get developed later on, but even the above me review also 𝘢𝘥𝘮𝘪𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘭𝘺 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘤𝘬 𝘢𝘴𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘶𝘱 𝘶𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘭 𝘤𝘩. 100-𝘪𝘴𝘩. So it’s confirmed if even the one who answered me is also that the early NPCs and Mods and stupidity on the plot is bad. And it doesn’t change the fact that the beginning part of this novel suck ass, even the preceding ‘review’ agree with this. So, if you don’t mind to read up until the middle part of this novel, up until ch 100, and can still keep up with the beginning of this novel that really suck ass that even the counterpart preceding review agreed, than you can still dive in. Of course, that thing only applied if you can hold the stupid NPCs, the illogical world setting, and MC’s personality problem in the earlier chapters.
alright so *someone* is clearly very worked up. maybe whatever the double giga walls of text plus hanger ons are right about whatever tf they’re saying and I even probably agree with most or all of it, idk im too scared to actually look at it for more than 3 seconds.
but counterpoint
the story actually gets fun by the end of holy kingdom arc. the author drops the stupid npc bs and actually starts making them real people, some cool shit goes down, and there’s serious developments on the harem aspects and prospects – there’s some REALLY nice ‘scenes’ if u kno what im sayin. i mean it doesn’t suddenly become amazing, the combat is still dumb af world development only barely improves and the clothing obsession gets worse if anything but
if u got terrified by the preceding ‘review’
i happen to really like this one, and as of current chapters (143) one of my faves on the site, so there you go
just gotta make it past a hundred chaps lol
Shouda add dense protagonist tag, imo
Not a good novel.
3. The setting
I don’t need to explain this one. The setting is God damn illogical. Just plain bad. Everyone is turned into a girl. There’s no political condition whatsoever even just a little bit. There’s a lot of illogical circumstances. Magic system? Swordmanship technique and information? The kingdom current condition? Even the atmosphere setting isn’t really well-written, they’re basically almost a non-existent, don’t need to be worry about that. The only thing that is well-written is just the characters description on their looks, appearance, and just their stupid half-naked clothes with a goddamn stupid dolphin pants. Man, what the fck. I can turn off my brain, but bitch please, not this damn much.
2. The Characters
Now, this is my main problem. The characters here feel really boring, bland, and cardboard. The MC also feels really bland, dumb, and unwise. He’s knowledgeable and well-informed, but that doesn’t make him clever and wise cause his inherent personality is that he’s really dense, REALLY DENSE, like really 𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙚. Dont confuse knowledgeable / well-informed with a wise & clever personality, cause someone can have a doctor degree but still be unwise & not clever at life reasoning and decision, so being knowledgeable and wise & clever are different things. Yeah, so he’s well-informed about the game itself, but he’s that dense & foolish & closed thinking that you can’t help but feel like he’s immature because he is only thinking about one way of information based on what he’s already known without even noticing the possibility of any variables or outside determinants. Yes, he’s a closed thinking, only think and understanding something in one way of thinking without even noticed that there might be other things. I’m not even joking. Example, after he meets the queen. The queen basically order to spy on him. So the queen order the guy who’s a brain dead to spy on him in order for him to act fool, so that the other spy can thoroughly examined and spied on him. So, the MC met the brain dead spy. Brain dead spy told him that he’ll spy on him and the queen ordered him to do so. MC thinks like “why?”. BITCH, YOU JUST LITERALLY HAVE A QUICK FIGHT WITH THE QUEEN, YOU JUST DODGED HER MOST QUICK ATTACK, AND YOU ALSO LIED TO HER AND YOU DIDN’T EVEN CUT YOUR OWN TAIL AFTER YOU KILLED THAT PIG-NOBLE DUDE, YOU JUST THREW AWAY THE PIG-NOBLE DEAD BODY TO THE QUEEN, YOU DIDN’T EVEN THINK THAT MAYBE THE QUEEN WOULD NOTICE THE TRACE ON THE PIG-NOBLE’S HARM ON HIS BODY, YOU’RE NOT EVEN THINKING THE POSSIBILITY YOU’LL GET CAUGHT, YET YOU’RE THINKING THAT “OH MAYBE, BECAUSE OF THE MODS, SHE ACTED LIKE THIS.” Hey, how dense you can be, main character? You choose the most shady and suspicious reason after you met Iris, you said that you lost your memory, and that you got cursed, you said that you’re weak, and then why the fuck would you even do a sparring and just showed all of your power, you said you’re weak, why the fuck would you say that you got cursed by the witch, while at the same time you can do holy magic, why the fuck you said that you have amnesia, but acts like you know everything, and you dare to think that everyone will just accept it right away? You dare to think not a single-one would notice this simple stupid facade of yours? You dare to think every other characters would just be a “yes-man” and not being suspicious? How closed-thinking and dense your way of thinking, man? And yet, you blame the mods for the queen who ordered to spy on you. Hes not even reflecting on his own action. Not even thinking other possibilities. He’s really dense as fuck. You can see this trait when he met Rize who seduced him inside his private room, yet he’s just like “Huh, woah, hum, no? What are you doing?” NI**A, SHE JUST SEDUCED YOU RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOUR NAKED EYES AND YOU NOT EVEN NOTICED. Man, how dense you can be? I don’t like main character’s personality and 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙤𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜 at all. He’s reasoning feels like a child. Sometimes he even forgot that the world he’s living in is full of mods that can also changed someone personality. Oh yeah, the other characters, as I’ve said, feels like a cardboard characters. They were not even thinking and being suspicious on him. Not even a single one. I don’t know if this flow will be continued until 100 chapters, but as I’ve mentioned, I only read this up until chapters 40, and this review is based on my experience and analysis, so it maybe will changed later. But hey, I don’t need that God damn long just to determine whether to drop a novel or not. Only need 40-50 chapters to decide to drop or going deeper. So for the characters, they all really either a cardboard characters or just down right infuriating. That’s the main problem. But if you’re here and you don’t mind that trait and then can just turn off ur brain and emotion and be expressionless, then you can read it.
I’ve read this up until chapters 40. I see the circumstances in which that people on the comment section only noticed and appreciated the tits on the cover. So, I guess cause there are still no coherent review, I will write it for you, ladies & gentlemen, as a poison tester in order you can thoroughly decide and choose whether to dive in and dwell or not. So, a story, in which a comprehensive and composed part of narrative consists of a lot of parts such as theme, genre, characters and characteristic (personality, strength, hex, weakness, etc.), plotline, moral / message, setting / the world’s set, writing style (the pacing and words choice), and other extrinsic factors too such as, maybe, the author’s decision itself. And in this review, I will mainly focus on three parts only and those are the plot (mainly talks about the conflict and exposition), the characters, and the setting. Okay, so here’s my review :
1. The plotline
Okay, so we start off with a boy on a game, he’s basically a nerd thus he waited for the game newest version and he yearned for it, he got an email from the company that said he’ll be the CBT (Closed Beta Person) to be the first person to test the game itself, he clicked and accepted the offer, suddenly got transferred into another world. After he got transferred, he faced a conflict suddenly & right away on the tutorial arc in which he needs to kill the butcher inside the dungeon. This arc feels like a sudden “BANG!” without even a hints or the set up or what I’d call the exposition part of the plotline, not really good if it stands for the “conflict” part, but if it stands for introduction to the “setting”, to tells the reader that this is a game world, full of tension as it’s atmosphere, there’s a dungeon, overall as a stand-alone exposition for the world itself, it can be great plot device for the next plot progression. But as a conflict? I guess not. Because, if it’s as a conflict, mainly in a great story, there’ll be the exposition part after it, but in this story in the first arc, those two parts are fused into one (he got transferred right away, fight with the butcher while also trying to understand the world around him, thus why I said the exposition [introduction] and the conflict [the fight with the butcher & others] are fused as one, the problem is that there’s no set up whatsoever before this arc kicks in that’s why I said as a conflict it’s not really good), which can be good or not, as I’ve said, depends on how you perceive it. Overall, in the first arc, it’s a solid 7 / 10, for me, not that bad but not that good either, and after that the resolution come out after iris came & he got transferred into the next arc — the knight arc. And in the knight arc itself, the identical problem also kicks in. There’s an explanation about the knight place and other’s characters, which can be considered as an exposition part, but the problem is that there’s no set up for the tension again, and then he, AGAIN, suddenly fight with Rize. And this goes on and on and on, even until Claudia shows up get harmed, to introduce the next arc in which the MC will fight the monster, but that’s not how you should set a conflict, in my opinion, if you want to set it well, you should’ve shown Claudia’s perspective first when she fought that monster in which she would lose, so that we know what kind of monster, move, place, and overall setting before Claudia showed up in front of the MC. Again, everything really feels like just forced and just come right onto your face with a lame & bad-written set up for the plot to kicks in. This problem can cause you to be bored cause If the set up is not written properly, cause the author couldn’t rise the tension and hype up the atmosphere in order for the reader to be “moved” and engaged into the conflict itself, so it comes out as 𝘽𝙇𝘼𝙉𝘿 PLOTLINE. If you don’t mind that kind of problem, then you should keep reading it.
This totally needs an update
mmm…. Portada-chan XD
This so funny and weird at the same time. The author explain so much cloth that the girls was wearing every ark haha
Harem y no yandere? Algo está mal…
No yandere this time?
Thx for the novel
Woah, so many horny Kids just for the cover.
Just some hours ago, there was nothing in the comments section
I threw away all the novel and started to read this because of the cover and I don’t regret it. I even though it was Skyrim with mods turn into novel.
Lmao
Hehehe. Too many download on the lb or maybe nexus.
Yea sure
i swear it’s not the cover that bring me here